[fic] LOVE SPY

Jan 17, 2010 03:29

Title: LOVE SPY - Chapter 16
Starring: HSJ and OC's
Rating: PG-13
Genre: friendship, love, romance
Disclaimer: i only own the plot
Author’s Notes: FIRST Oc fic...^_^V
Summary: Ten young guys trained to be the most skilled secret agents in J-STARS, the most eligible secret agency in Japan. They were sent in a mission to protect ten young ladies. These ( Read more... )

multi-chaptered, oc-fic, fic: love spy

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kodochalover January 17 2010, 09:45:02 UTC
MY SPOT ^^!!!
now i go off to read ^^

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my loveeeeee ^^ kodochalover January 17 2010, 10:17:55 UTC
Yama-chan... I know you are hurt.. but dont be so mean to the poor girl D:

"I'm asking if you like oneesama," Ren repeated her question.

hehe she got you there yama-chan xD!!
now answer :X

"Who cares if it's her, she doesn't even know it,"

lol xD!! way to give yourself away silly xD

"Yamada rolled his eyes,"
EVIL D:

he's only reasons why he was with Ren cause one, Yabu should be the one guarding her but chose to guard his girlfriend instead,

lol duh xD its his gf. He obviously wants to guard and protect her ^^

"and two, Chinen took his place in guarding Aya."

ahhh so painful T^T
i bet this reason hurts the most...

I actually like Yamada-kun," Ren looked at Yamada with a smile.

uwaahh!! shes brave :D
id be kind of embarrassed to confess so straight forward like that lol
of course id be scared of rejection as well :(

but it seems like that you won't even notice me until I tell you this, you're so focused to my sister,"*sigh* i understand her pain D ( ... )

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my loveeeeee ^^ pt 2 kodochalover January 17 2010, 10:18:31 UTC

"I have already decided, here's the deal, let's get to know each other first, like any other people, you know, going out, hanging out more, be closer to each other... and just let destiny decide for us,"

yay!!! yama-chan ^^
im so glad he agreed~
im already sensing a new couple xD!!!
i cant wait :]

"Yeah, just last night when everyone else was sleeping,"

sounds sooooooooooo wrong xD
like they did something else as well lol

"Ooh, sounds fishy eh?" Yuya smirked."

haha even Yuyan agrees xD!!

"COMMENTS ARE LOVED!!!!"

This comment contains my love ^^
hehe i think all of my comments contain my love xD

thank you for the update!!
you are really working hard~
and for that i thank you :]
i thank you for making a smile on my face before i go to sleep ^^

and now, I'll im thinking about is how many traps i fell into lol xD!!
probably a lot ^O^

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Re: my loveeeeee ^^ pt 2 kodochalover January 17 2010, 10:19:41 UTC
lol my comment exceeded the limit xD!!!
so i had to make it into 2 parts ^^

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Re: my loveeeeee ^^ pt 2 ayakanishi January 17 2010, 19:14:22 UTC
*done counting in how many traps you fell this time* fifteen times.... LOLS!!!!

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chiyakenyu January 17 2010, 11:30:28 UTC
Ren is a smart girl!

Hahh i loved this chapter! :D

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reiko_amakusa January 17 2010, 12:06:39 UTC
Oh... Update please~!!

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hyuuchiha_miki January 17 2010, 12:40:49 UTC
Aww, now you're officially with Chinen~ *pokes*

Seriously, Yamada sounds so ebil here >:D But I'm hoping to read about him and Ren loving soon! Excited X]

Wiipii~ you're done with the OC chappie, now I can't wait for the other chapters!

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