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ayaa_chandesu

Eight Years

Jan 14, 2010 02:24

Title: Eight Years
Pairing: OnKey, with random 2min
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Crack
Summary: Lee Jinki's life multiplied by eight.
Notes: Dedicated to my lovelies, eter_loves_yaoi and rikli. Finally made your smut ;p

( Jinki had envisioned his first time to be with a sweet and pretty girl, in which they both lose their virginity together, and it would be beautiful and romantic, but alas, it wasn't to be. )

fandom: shinee, rating: nc-17, pairing: taemin/minho [2min], pairing: onew/key [onkey]

Comments 89

ayaa_chandesu January 14 2010, 02:26:59 UTC

SPOT for eter_loves_yaoi

eter_loves_yaoi January 14 2010, 08:45:46 UTC

OMOMOMOMOMO!!!!! brb reading!!!(*&%$^$%$#^^*

eter_loves_yaoi January 14 2010, 09:04:29 UTC

**_______________________**

I love you! it's the greatest! it's great that you made jinki's character like the real one and kibum's also... omg, I can't write a proper comment right now, I'm mind-blown o_o

I love the smex <3

ayaa_chandesu January 14 2010, 10:49:47 UTC

LOL bb <3
I love you too LOL
I had to rush that ending so much (couldn't just leave Minho out~) and I was just posting it at around 2am when my mom turned up behind me >___________> Good thing she didn't read a thing and I was like ASSACDSVDSVBSDBASFVADBVDS XD

Glad you liked it <3

ayaa_chandesu January 14 2010, 02:27:18 UTC

SPOT for rikli

rikli January 14 2010, 09:06:15 UTC

ooooooo i'm schocked now! *going to read*

rikli January 14 2010, 09:31:15 UTC

omfg, i'm laughing like crazy right now XDDD

*5 minutes later*

ok XD damn... the smut wasn't a fail at all O_O
still don't know what to write, it was simple AMAZING and full of AWESOMENESS and...

"Jinki, I'm bored."

win XD Kibum saying that is SO RIGHT and i can imagine that right away XD

"Are you sure...?"

"Of course I am, my parents do it all the time."

i died here!!! XD

Possibly because Kim Kibum does things like this to him. Things.

sounds familiar... ;D

*gone lost reading again*

i loooveee youuu <333 :D

ayaa_chandesu January 14 2010, 10:51:10 UTC

OMG I lol'd so much at your hint at THINGS. XD
I love youuu toooo bb <333
XDDD
You'll write something eventually~~

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jaelynnx3 January 14 2010, 02:28:13 UTC

SPOT :)

jaelynnx3 January 14 2010, 02:46:45 UTC

LOL, poor Taemin.
Your OnKey is win :)

ayaa_chandesu January 14 2010, 10:51:58 UTC

Thanks for reading! <3

jaejoongxyuno07 January 14 2010, 02:37:53 UTC

LMFAO!
THIS WAS GOLD.

ayaa_chandesu January 14 2010, 10:52:12 UTC

LOL, thanks for reading! <3

rinni1905 January 14 2010, 02:47:38 UTC

Spot!!!!!

rinni1905 January 14 2010, 04:06:06 UTC

Aw, so cute, the wonderful lifetime of Lee Jinki :)

I want to be Jinki :)). Kibum is really... how can he even stole Jinki first kiss when Jinki was 8, and he was only 6. Tsk, tsk, naughty boy. Luckily, Jinki wasn't charge for his sexual intercourse with the underaged boy named Kibum. Our dubu had become a real decent bad boy :)

So so cute!!!!

ayaa_chandesu January 14 2010, 10:53:33 UTC

Kibum knows no boundaries XDDD
I wasn't quite sure about writing that part, actually, since it's underage sex and all that xD but I wrote it anyway~
Yes, dubu the decent bad boy <3

Thanks for reading! <3