The Ghost of Manchester: Chapter Five

[awomanofletters]

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Word count for Chapter Three: 3,500+
Word count so far: 17,700+

Chapter Five

I didn’t expect her to be quiet most of the way. The drive from the station to the hospital wasn’t a long one, perhaps seven or eight minutes, but it gave Sgt. Donovan enough time to skim through the file

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[deltachild]

*flails*

I was all optimistic about the pieces of the puzzle falling together and now you've got me all scared after another insight into 'Hat-Man' 0_o

I really love what you are doing with this story!

[awomanofletters]

Thanks for commenting!

[ilenn]

OMG new chapter! ...Just as I was about to go out. Well, my friend will just have to wait a bit. XD

This... looks like the resolution can't be far away. Oh, I really liked the explanation to Donovan's hate for Sherlock. And I hope we'll find out what she doesn't know. Haha, and their reaction to the "wedding" thing. :D And Hat-Man! :D And Max & Claudette. In fact, all the details from the series that you've included in there. So much... depth.

And... a cliffhanger. Oh. You. Get back to writing! *puppy eyes*

[awomanofletters]

Thanks so much for commenting! *runs away*

[nmissi]

This is just getting sooo good. I can't wait for each new bit!

[awomanofletters]

Thanks for commenting!

[sparkfrost]

Found this via the bbcsherlock comm, and it is phenomenal! I went speeding through the first five chapters, and I am crazy excited to read more. Awesome, awesome story.

[awomanofletters]

Thanks so much!

[love_bug_54]

Oooooooo...... can't wait for more!

[awomanofletters]

Thank you!