wake the morning light - iker/david

[awkward_sorta]

wake
the morning light
Iker Muniain/David De Gea
~2380
G

Loosely based off this prompt at we_are_cities

Comments

[awkward_sorta]

Full disclosure: the line 'He writes in English, dreams in Spanish' is taken from the poem in the prompt.

[the_wild_son]

Oh, I still love this. I know I quoted the line from the poem to you yesterday, but it's a lovely line that really ties the fic together.

This is just everything about your writing that is quality - thoughtful, understated, quiet and full of feeling <3

[awkward_sorta]

You find the thing to say that means the most <3 thank you so much <3 <3

[dreamofthem]

I'm sorry it made Vaz Te sad though

[the_wild_son]

It's okay, it wasn't your story that made him sad. He was just sad because Nani didn't reply to his text ;_;

[liberta]

I loved this. Agree with the_wild_son, your writing is beautiful for all the qualities she names <3

[awkward_sorta]

Thank you so much <3 that's just such a lovely compliment <3

[kfunk22]

this is really lovely.

[awkward_sorta]

thank you I'm so glad you liked it <3

[justkisa]

this is really beautiful

this line -

Now he doesn’t know what to speak. He writes in English, dreams in Spanish, and when he’s out on the pitch he shouts in any language that comes to him.

I kind of adore it.

really the whole thing is lovely

[awkward_sorta]

It's a relief that that line worked for everyone, because I was afraid of shoe-horning it in. I'm really glad it did. Thank you so much for your comment <3