Comments | avonlea_dreamer: I'm alive-- and I bring you fluff and smut to start off your week

avonlea_dreamer

I'm alive-- and I bring you fluff and smut to start off your week

Apr 06, 2009 17:00

The rest of the smut fic I posted months ago-- and finally managed to finish. So, without further ado, the flip-side of 'Fantasy' and the rest of 'Watching Her'.

Part 1a posted here to refresh your memory.

( Really, he was head over heels in lust and love when everything she did aroused him. )

fluff, smut

Comments 12

filkertom April 6 2009, 22:48:43 UTC

Hee. Very nice. Or rather, very hot and wicked. And nice.

sculder42 April 7 2009, 00:48:43 UTC

Oh YAY!!! Harry + Hermione + smuff = FTW!!

One of my fave lines?

*Where, oh where, was that hole in the ground that must have just opened up so he could crawl into it and die of mortification?* Way to go, Harry!! hee hee hee

Brilliant as always, my dear. *applauds wildly*

1scout April 7 2009, 01:16:51 UTC

*brain melts from H/Hr hotness*
That was hot and incredible, and fabulous and hot!!

YAY!for fanfic t00bs!!

ladybluestar April 7 2009, 13:54:06 UTC

Fabulous, dear and very, very hot.

I liked the little conversation about work and while he certainly wanted her to stay with him, he wouldn't ask it and in return, she decided to stay. Actually, I think that was my favorite moment--and as you pointed out, one thing that separates Harry from Ron so entirely.

avonlea_dreamer April 7 2009, 22:52:24 UTC

Thank you, dear! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

I'm really glad I thought of that little moment and the comparison between Harry and Ron because it is something that I will would get to be an issue and I do think Harry would be more understanding than Ron is. He's always been more understanding about Hermione studying so it just makes sense that he would be the same about Hermione's work.

You ROCK!! eric_bowling April 7 2009, 15:09:15 UTC

A wonderfully smutty fic! No one writes it as well as you do!
I was wondering, what's your opinion of "first time" fics? Do you like to do them? Do you tend to be romantic in dealing with them, or do you add the realism of first-time exploration and discovery. Now I sound like a perv!!! I'm not!!!

Re: You ROCK!! avonlea_dreamer April 7 2009, 22:50:33 UTC

Thanks.
As to 'first time' fics, I'm not entirely sure how to answer. I've certainly written several of them and they are (of course) romantic but I only write romantic stories, really. I try to make them sound more realistic of first-time exploration but I'm not always sure how well I succeed there.