Posting a little early because I'm not sure when I'll have time later...

Sep 10, 2007 00:17

The next part of 'The Truth About Love'-- where I had fun with history and literature and period detail. This chapter has some of the dialogue that I found easiest to write, for some reason; it is easy to write H/Hr banter and I do love their friendship.

For my dear avidbeader.
Enjoy!

Part 4: Beginnings )

truth about love, au, fluff

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wildly_wrathful September 10 2007, 06:55:16 UTC
Another wonderful chapter. I love their banter, their friendship is one of things I love about Harry and Hermione. I can't wait until the next chapter! :D

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leonhart_17 September 10 2007, 12:14:24 UTC
the dialouge is great! this was a great chapter! very cute! great job!

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midnight_27 September 10 2007, 12:41:50 UTC
Nicely done. I adore the tenderness in the dialogue between Harry and Hermione and great description of Godric’s Hollow.

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ladybluestar September 10 2007, 12:59:36 UTC
I love how the chapter is bookended with dissatisfaction, even though there is so much delight during the day.

Harry's realizations were very touching and they certainly are making progress. Delightful library and the combination of Muggle and Magical so that neither overwhelms the other.

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utkari02 September 10 2007, 13:13:22 UTC
Yay! I get so excited for the next chapter!

Very well done. I can't wait for some snogging!!! :P

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avonlea_dreamer September 11 2007, 01:15:49 UTC
Um, if you're looking for snogging, you'll be waiting a while... but don't worry, it'll happen-- eventually... ;-)
thanks for reading and reviewing; so glad you're enjoying this!!

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utkari02 September 11 2007, 01:28:39 UTC
No problem, I can wait, because waiting means it's real. :D

I'm enjoying it emmensly. I don't often read a story that's not been completed, and eagerly anticipate each new chapter of this tale.

Thank you for all of your stories that you share with us!!!

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