Very sweet. A bit difficult to read sometimes because of the formatting (the lengthy paragraphs are hard on old eyes, like mine ;) But overall I liked this a lot. Very different from your usual work in some ways, but very similar in others :)
Okay, Sarah. I really, really loved this. I actually thought it was perfect.
It was extremely sweet in parts, and I think you did an excellent job in depicting the characters that you chose to write. Some of the explainations were long, as they should be, and some for instance Malfoys' and their grandsons were short, and very funny I might add.
The above people are right in saying that this isn't your usual style of writing. But sometimes different is good.
Oh that was just lovely! I absolutely love a good Harry/Hermione fic where they realize they've always been in love with each other. I liked how it was through the eyes of others but in a slightly different way than I've seen before.
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It was extremely sweet in parts, and I think you did an excellent job in depicting the characters that you chose to write. Some of the explainations were long, as they should be, and some for instance Malfoys' and their grandsons were short, and very funny I might add.
The above people are right in saying that this isn't your usual style of writing. But sometimes different is good.
Definately one of my favorites.
Thanks for sharing,
Kari
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*sigh*
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