Beta help?
Hi all -
I am working on an original story and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give it a read and give me some feedback. Here is a summary:
Maria and Moesha Li, identical twins in their mid-twenties, live in the Boston area. Maria’s boyfriend, Jose, is an engineering student in college and he winds up doing research in a lab that has been taken over by a vampire.
It is too bad that the vampire chose that lab, because Maria is not just Jose’s girlfriend, she and her sister are also vampire hunters. They wind up teaming up with Jose’s roommate, Chris, to save him and kill the vampire.
The story is about 9K. It is rated T for some gore and language. Thank you!
I am working on an original story and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give it a read and give me some feedback. Here is a summary:
Maria and Moesha Li, identical twins in their mid-twenties, live in the Boston area. Maria’s boyfriend, Jose, is an engineering student in college and he winds up doing research in a lab that has been taken over by a vampire.
It is too bad that the vampire chose that lab, because Maria is not just Jose’s girlfriend, she and her sister are also vampire hunters. They wind up teaming up with Jose’s roommate, Chris, to save him and kill the vampire.
The story is about 9K. It is rated T for some gore and language. Thank you!