Bleach fic: Consequences

[aviss]

Title: Consequences
Author: aviss
Recipient: norrowaPairing: Kaien/Yoruichi, Urahara/Yoruichi, Kaien/Miyako

Comments

[zelha]

HOLY SHI-

OMG. This is gold. *mems*

I can't even begin to list all the things I liked about this piece, so let's settle in a big squeal and that's it, hmm?

X3

[aviss]

Thanks! I'm happy to see I didn't fail with this piece... it was a real challenge.

[evergrnterrace]

Oh my god. Seriously.

I don't even have words.
*flails and screams and sobs and diez.*

Marry me.

[aviss]

*blushes*

Thanks!

[unedited]

Ooooh, that was wonderful in a lot of ways. I love how you captured Yoruichi's light mockery here, and how you showed us her relationship with Urahara -- maybe not monogamous, but no less utterly meaningful to them despite that. And I love the slow progress of meaning into her thing with Kaien, and the way the tragic ending of their "unfinished game" ruined the fun in it after that.

The writing and composition were great and eee. ♥ Thank you!

[aviss]

Thanks! I like to think Urahara and Yoruichi have a solid, though strange relationship. And they would be the kind to think up something like this.

[aviss]

Phew, thanks! I'm very happy you like it, when I saw the request I wondered if I would be able to do it, so I was very surprise at how quick this was.

[shayheyred]

This is remarkable. And so very sad, and twisty. Very believable, too, for Yoruichi and Kisuke. And Kaien, as always, breaks my heart.

[aviss]

Thanks! I think Kaien is such a tragic character, he doesn't get enough love.