Comments | aviss: Bleach Fic: Distorted Reflection

aviss

Oct 05, 2009 00:20

Title: Distorted Reflection
Author: aviss
Pairing: Grimmjow/Ichigo
Rating: PG-13 so far, will go up.
Genre: Angst, Psychological
Warning: mind-fuckery abounds, character deaths (not Grimmjow or Ichigo, but quite a few)
Word Count: ~3.300 this part
Summary: Ichigo has the feeling his life is not what it was supposed to be.

( Ichigo sat on the uncomfortable couch, his eyes staring unsightly out of the window while his hands clenched and unclenched rhythmically. He wanted to be anywhere but there, in that soothing pastel room with the softly speaking man looking at him. He hated that room and he hated that man. )

Comments 36

fiercepotato October 4 2009, 22:53:25 UTC

This is really interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I think I love your writing style here.

aviss October 5 2009, 17:57:25 UTC

Thank you!

kaizokusen October 4 2009, 23:24:13 UTC

First time I'm reading a G/I fanfic ♥, and I totally loved it. I can't wait the next part me too DD:!

aviss October 5 2009, 17:57:49 UTC

Thanks! It's an addictive pairing, be warned XD!

new fic shu_han October 5 2009, 00:01:16 UTC

i love you!!!
i hope the next chappie comes out quick and that you have a very generous muse for lots of chapters ^_^

Re: new fic aviss October 5 2009, 17:58:28 UTC

Thanks so much! Won't be more than 3 parts, 4 tops me thinks... wasn't even supposed to be writing another multipart XD

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aviss October 5 2009, 17:58:38 UTC

Thank you!

bundamba October 5 2009, 01:39:06 UTC

This is really good, I'm enjoying it very much. I can't wait for the next part!!!

aviss October 5 2009, 17:59:29 UTC

Thank you!