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Bleach Fic: Leap of Faith - Part III

Mar 15, 2009 23:44

Title: Leap of Faith - Part III
Author: aviss
Pairing: Grimmjow/Ichigo
Rating: R so far
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Warnings: None so far
Word Count: ~2.400 this part
Summary: Ichigo has problems adapting to the peaceful days after the war. However, they won't be peaceful for long

( Grimmjow stopped and turned to look at him. What are you doing here, Shinigami? he asked angrily, Why did you follow me? )

bleach, grimmjow/ichigo, fic, leap of faith

Comments 26

lovelle7 March 15 2009, 23:10:07 UTC

Believe me when I say I check every day for you to update this story. I really love it! Ichigo sure ends up in a big mess, and Grimmjow is a jerk. Did I tell you that this story is great? :D

aviss March 15 2009, 23:21:59 UTC

Grimmjow is a big jerk, I have to agree with you... but that's what we love about him :)

conjure_lass March 16 2009, 00:18:55 UTC

Ahhhh...this story is SO delightful. There's just something about them getting interupted that makes the end result so much sweeter, ne?

I actually really like the idea of Orihime and Ulquiorra together (even with the current manga storyline going on) so i'm pleased that they're together (and well written too) in this piece.

The pacing and writing is really very good. There's just enough cliffhanger at the end of each chapter to keep you coming back for more, and the chapters flow well.

I'm really liking it. Keep up the great work!

aviss March 16 2009, 11:23:28 UTC

Thank you! If they ever get to do it uninterrupted they're not going to believe it :)

madrona_8 March 16 2009, 00:29:49 UTC

If all the interruptions are an indicator then they are going to be all over each other when they get a few moments alone.....
I almost feel as frustrated as they do I'm sure.

aviss March 16 2009, 11:23:57 UTC

Oh yes, that's going to be one memorable fuck... if they ever get to it :P

sakuraangeliux March 16 2009, 00:34:57 UTC

Aviss-san!!!! waaa!!! actualizo!!!*^* soy feliz!!!! :)....wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!1 jajajajaja estuve toda la semana esperando para que sea domingo y leer el nuevo chap de su historia T_T. Realmente me gusta mucho!! >< *Grimm anda urgido!!! |DDDDDD he wants smex!! XDD* jajajaja and Ichigo too!! que no se haga zonzo XDDDDDDD..

En serio este capo le quedo de lujo!

Nos seguimos leyendo ^^

PS: Hey que le pareció el nuevo chap???, de hecho cuando vi a Ichi Hollow con el cabello largo, empece a fangirliar horrible!! me recordó mucho a Grimmjow xDDDD y yo asi de NOOO...Grimm where the hell are you!? DDDD|

Cuidese ^^

aviss March 16 2009, 11:30:39 UTC

El nuevo capi? Que hubiese dado de ostias a Orihime hasta aburrirme, con un poc de suerte Shiro lo hara por mi XD

ruyu March 16 2009, 03:08:34 UTC

*has a huge ass smile on her face*

Awesome chapter, as usual!

aviss March 16 2009, 11:30:56 UTC

Thank you :)