Bleach fic: Sin Salida (Spanish)/No Way Out (English)

[aviss]

I just found this in my hard drive... I had completely forgotten I wrote it last year for a friend's fanzine in Spanish. Me, being the complete retard I actually am was completely unable to write in my mother tongue, and now after I read it, it does sound more Spanish (from America) than actual Castillian (from Spain). Long story short, I had to

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[madrona_8]

Oh sure, a little bit of canon is different but who cares?!?!?! That is full of tease. I like the way that Ichigo isn't really shirking away. He's the kind of guy who makes a promise and keeps it. In fact, he seems to be happy to comply.

[aviss]

Heh, I would only be too happy to do it were I in his position.. thanks!

[lovelle7]

Super! :3 Even if it's just a kiss it's so hot! I can't write stories in my languge either... It sounds really good in Engling but in swedish it sounds just stupid and clumsy, to a grade you get embarrased from it :D Hehe This story was great (as usual) Perfect for waking up properly ;)

[aviss]

Thank you! It's not that it sounds bad in spanish, is more that I'm not used to write in spanish anymore... but well, it's not bad writing in english

[kashinosei]

sweet kiss...lingering feelin, want more...XD~

[aviss]

Thanks!

[ak_bennington]

Jojojojojo qué bien sabe Grimmjow conseguir lo que quiere ^^. Yo pagaría gustosamente ese precio (y más) a cambio de que me abrieran una Garganta ^^. Y me gustó cuando dijo que no se quedaría sólo en eso. Ahora Ichigo tiene que esforzarse por sobrevivir, porque como hombre de palabra tiene que terminar de pagar la deuda con Grimmjow ^^.
¿Veremos la segunda parte? *ojitos de gatito*
Oye qué lástima que al final no saliera el fanzine de tu amiga >_<, pero bueno, menos mal que encontraste el fic!!! XD
Espero impacientemente la segunda parte de “Leap of faith” ;)
Besitos!
Ak

[aviss]

Ya bueno, si lo hacen este año pues escribire otra cosa XDD Ya sabes que GRimmi no iba a quedar conforme con solo eso, yo tampoco me quedaria XDD

Y estoy a ver si me dejan terminar el siguiente capi de Leap, se estan portando mal y se niegan a hacer lo que les digo... cabrones!

[kura_ichy69]

ooohhh, this are so hot and rough together! i hope u can write more of them together

[aviss]

Thanks! I love them together so I will definitely write more :)