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Bleach fic: Breaking

Aug 25, 2008 22:38

Title: Breaking
Author: aviss
Pairing: Ichigo/Byakuya
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst
Summary: Everyone has a limit, Ichigo just reached his.
Notes: Follows Again

( He has known for some time things were going to end like this, and still he's been unable to stop it. )

bleach, byakuya/ichigo, fic

Comments 10

kerumica August 25 2008, 21:39:37 UTC

I'm surprised he actually got up and ran after him. Of course, he didn't "technically" beg him to stay but it being Byakuya, I think calling him by his first name is a step in the right direction.

aviss August 28 2008, 14:48:27 UTC

Well, we woulnd't believe any love declarations from him... e woulnd't be Byakuya at all... I'm glad you liked it

good_chaser August 26 2008, 00:27:52 UTC

♥ hee~ a nice follow up! :D i'm glad there is a hope ^^ Byakuya run after Ichigo naked? *giggles* absolutely a hope XD Ichigo can make joke of this after..well, things going better :D

aviss August 28 2008, 14:48:58 UTC

He can't let Ichigo go... Thanks for reading

labymiro August 26 2008, 10:40:38 UTC

It may be short but... Ah, Ichigo turning up after his first name was a nice touch. I had almost expected to turn around at the first call. Aww.

aviss August 28 2008, 14:49:25 UTC

Well, he didn't take much convincing, but not the first call :)

hu3long2 August 26 2008, 12:58:04 UTC

Oh good, he did break! Like the running nude too!

aviss August 28 2008, 14:49:47 UTC

Both of them did... Thanks for reading.

samej September 30 2008, 09:07:14 UTC

Aww I liked how Byakuya almost can't say "Stay" and in the last moment he managed to make it. It's not my pairing but I like the fic anywhere, it's hard to make good B/I, and you did it :)

aviss September 30 2008, 12:05:13 UTC

Yes, he's too proud for his own good. I'm glad you liked it, they are indeed quite dificult to write together.