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aviss

From the remixredux08

Jun 07, 2008 22:58

I didn't have time to post this when it was revealed so here it is now.

Title: Improper Uses of a Hell Butterfly (The Friends With Benefits Remix)
Author: avissFandom: Bleach ( Read more... )

bleach fic, bleach, fic, renji/matsumoto

Comments 13

hu3long2 June 7 2008, 23:41:45 UTC

This is really sad... it feels almost as if they're settling for "perfect" when they could have "good". It was also as funny as heck, but really sad *droops*

But no matter what, I love how the friendship and mutual trust shine through so clearly-- the more time they spend together, the closer they get and the better they know each other-- it also gets tenderer.

I love the hell butterflies responses- I think they were the best part of this fic, actually, but I'm also a sucker for comedy. Notable lines-- Renji's first reaction to learning he might have slept with Matsu was "Was I good?" LOL
And Matsu' response to Renji encouraging her about Shuuhei-- "I'm already doing a lot worse." LOLx2

Thanks for sharing this

aviss June 8 2008, 20:10:13 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I also love comedy so I'm relly happy you found it funny.

kisu_no_ichigo June 8 2008, 14:41:08 UTC

I'm not really a het fan but I must admit... This piece was freakin awesome!
It was funny and sad. I really like the pairing Renji/Matsumoto and even though they stopped seeing each other like that, they still remained friends without hard feelings. I really like that. I really look forward to more. ^^

aviss June 8 2008, 20:10:50 UTC

Thank you, they are the type to keep being friends no matter what.

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aviss June 19 2008, 13:37:54 UTC

Thank you!

vayshti June 9 2008, 15:18:00 UTC

(delurks)

This was lovely.

Your writing gave the lightest of pictures, and yet the emotion is all the more poignant for it.

(relurks)

aviss June 19 2008, 13:38:07 UTC

Thanks.

++ One of the best tirbute! ++ ardenilia June 13 2008, 14:44:08 UTC

Awesome and well done! as a devoted RenRan fan i must say thank you for making a great tribute to this sexy couple. Thank you once again! Besides being very well-written, the theme itself is very unique and adapted perfectly on the couple itself~ :3

I hope that one day, your muse would allow another RenRan fic to happen *____*

Re: ++ One of the best tirbute! ++ aviss June 19 2008, 13:38:50 UTC

Thnks so much, they make a good couple :)