Fanfiction: The Most Important Thing (one-shot)

Mar 15, 2010 12:04

Characters: Tackey and Tsubasa
Pairing: TakiTsuba
Genre: Angst, comedy, fluff, romance
Rating: PG
Summary: Sometimes we get scared and lose our way. Tsubasa realises that he has lost something precious and sets out to salvage what is left. But will it be too little, too late?
Disclaimer: I know that I'll never lose T&T because I never had them.

The Most Important Thing )

stories, fanfiction (mainly t&t)

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dorayaki_chan March 15 2010, 07:42:25 UTC
HOOOW LOVELY, BITTER SWEET JUST LIKE MY FAVORITE CHOCOLATE XD AND DON'T WE ALL WISHED THAT'S WHAT REALLY HAPPEN IN T&T BED ROOM OR ANY OTHER ROOM :)

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avery_averette March 15 2010, 08:28:21 UTC
I like bittersweet chocolate too!
I think some of us might actually hope it was us in the room instead. But Takki might still prefer Tsubasa after all.

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raixas March 15 2010, 07:56:17 UTC
awwww~
i really like the toothbrush part...;D

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avery_averette March 15 2010, 08:26:47 UTC
Thanks!
The toothbrush part was inspired by the song, The Lonely Toothbrush, theme song for Nagase Tomoya's drama, Mukodono!

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kumiko_yamapi March 15 2010, 14:38:19 UTC
This is so lovely!!! So much sweetness at the end!! =D I loved it!! <3

"He didn't want anything to change. But he had changed things himself." --> I just loved this line. I think it shows really well Tsubasa's feelings, which by the way feel so real.

My favourite fic so far was definitely the TakkiPi 'Some Things Never Change'. But I liked all your fics I've read!

Looking forward to your next fanfiction!! ^.^

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avery_averette March 16 2010, 04:53:25 UTC
Thank you for your continued support! You've been around so often that I can remember your username by heart.
You have a RyoPi serial going on (chapter 3 and counting) and I'll be starting on it soon. I'll need inspiration for my next one which will have your favourite Pi: more TakkiPi, Pin and KamePi.
Let's keep supporting each other. Happy writing!

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snow_meow March 15 2010, 16:20:36 UTC
I like this fic alot.
Simple yet so sweet and conveys all the emotions of the moment that they both feel.

I am glad that you wrote it from both parties POV.

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avery_averette March 16 2010, 05:00:06 UTC
Thank you for liking it and for your informative comments! I'm glad that I hit the right buttons.

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skylightdance March 15 2010, 20:17:42 UTC
Very sweet and romantic.

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avery_averette March 16 2010, 05:11:11 UTC
Thank you! Coming from an artist, it feels very good.

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skylightdance March 16 2010, 15:16:05 UTC
Thank you, thank you, for calling me an artist, you made my day sweetheart.

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