Fanfiction: Love Artificially (Chapter 2/2)

[avery_averette]

Characters: Tackey and Tsubasa, with mentions of Jin
Pairing: TakiTsuba
Genre: AU, fluff and romance
Rating: PG13
Summary (2/2): When a new lover robot steps into Tsubasa's life, where does Takki Love Robo stand?
               (1/2): An order mix-up ends up with Tsubasa going home with his worst nightmare. But when opposites attract, will this

Comments

[kumiko_yamapi]

Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!!!!!!! I just love this second part!! It's so sweet!!!
I feel sorry for Yua but everyone knows that Takki and Tsubasa are just meant to be!! ^-^

A romance/murder story? Mmm... Sounds interesting!! =D Looking forward to it!

[avery_averette]

Grazie Mille! While you may try different pairings, I can only try different languages.
But since you suggested, the next work, will start off with the Akame that I first wrote. Pi, Ryo and of course T&T will also be main characters.
Let's keep writing!

[kumiko_yamapi]

You wrote 'thanks' in Italiaaaaaaan!!!! =D
Now that you said there will be your first Akame and also Pi and Ryo I'm even more curious about your new fic!!
I really can't wait to read it!! ^.^

[yamapiislove]

aw, i really enjoyed it.
T&T never fails.
i loved the ending.
i wish you couldv'e described the scnes more xD
thank you :)

btw, i finished my multi-chap :D

[avery_averette]

Thank you!
Finishing your Beautiful Mess makes me wanna have Toma inside my next work too. From what litle I've seen of him on the youtube clips earlier, you're right, he's bubbly and cute. And I'm sure he's got a bit of history with Takki too.
Thanks for your coment about describing the scenes. Do you mean the fleshing out the missing bit of stories or describing the setting and mood? I admit that I've left out parts of the story due to time constraint. But if it's working on the mood, then I fail. Decriptive writing - being poetic or flowery is hardly my forte. But I'm working on it very slowly.

[yamapiislove]

actually, i was kinda talking about the scenes where they made love
but just ignore my perverted thoughts. :P

aw, you like Toma now?
that's great!

no, no, you didn't fail. it was perfect :)

[avery_averette]

Unfortunately, suggestive sex is probably more than I can handle. As for the actual intercourse, I'm sure you can imagine it way better than I can ever hope to describe. That's what hentaimagination is for. Happy hentaimagining!

[fluffyblanket]

Wonderful - you're so prolifc !

[avery_averette]

Apparently, where I lack in quality, I make up for in quantity.
But I'm working on it. I've six books waiting to be read at home. They're books from Canadian author, Margaret Atwood (of The Blind Assasin fame) and English writer, PG Wodehouse (comedic genius).
What are you currently reading?

[fluffyblanket]

I'm rereading "Le Sursis" from Sartre's trilogy , "Les chemins de la liberté". It's so long since I read it before that it's like reading it for the first time . I think I've now read everything by Isabel Allende - she's so prolific ! Reading novels is a pleasant way of brushing up my French and Spanish .

[avery_averette]

Never heard of them. But I'll look them up. If they're only in French or Spanish, I'm afraid their pleasure will forever be out of my reach.
I'm glad that you enjoy your French and Spanish. Although I speak fairly good Chinese, I find it rather difficult to read. Sadly, reading my mother tongue gives me a headache.

[dorayaki_chan]

aw SOOOW sweeeeeeeeeet >O< just like jason mras's song it takes the one to know the other ;DD

[dorayaki_chan]

gyaaaaaaaa you notice it my new icon guy,yoy,re right that 's tomoya nagase >< my biggest JE crush ever ha ha ha ha but my first JE crush was tackey sama of course >O< and the ex woul be Tanaka Koki from KATTUN >o< just love that picture of koki so much , with that cute giant panda beside him XD

[avery_averette]

Happy birthday! Hope you're having fun!!
Just the opposite of me, my first is Tomoya and biggest is Takki. I first saw him in Mukodono and last in My Boss, My Hero. He's hilarious! I hope to see Takki do comedy too, he'll be a natural!
Kohi is sweet but I think I prefer Panda-san.
As for Doraemon, I watched him when I was little too!
Have a great time, all the time!

[gashinenai]

oh I didn't get to read the end of this fic earlier
*kicks university*
awwwwwwww they are sooooooooooooo cute together like that
<333333333333333333333

[avery_averette]

Well, I guess it’s better late than never. Besides, it’s not your fault. You’re a student after all. And not forgetting, mind-numbing, breath-stopping, heart-racing, muscle-straining, organ-abusing university needs love too.
And thank you! I like TxT like this too.
Happy studying! May you ace your studies and make yourself and your loved ones very proud!!