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Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) astolat May 24 2012, 15:24:28 UTC
Just a little vignette for this prompt, hope someone gives it a longer fill:

Same

The hell was that it had still been him the whole time. It hadn't been Stockholm, he'd been trained for that; and it hadn't been some kind of magic that turned you into a zombie. Everything he had, everything he was, he'd given to Loki. He'd been happy to do it. Funny how little free will seemed to matter, when you got down to it.

He'd still drunk his coffee black with six sugars, he'd picked up a used paperback of Madame Bovary to read before bed because he'd been halfway through it on the Kindle he'd consciously trashed to keep from being tracked. He'd jerked off pleasantly in the shower imagining Loki's hands working his cock.

If Loki had pushed open the door to the shower stall and smiled at him and said, "Shall I have you, Agent Barton?" in that same casually arrogant I-own-you voice, Clint knew he'd have braced his hands on the wall and taken a wide stance and been more than happy to have Asgardian cock shoved up his ass. He'd still have enjoyed the cock now.

Loki wasn't getting anywhere near arm's-length of him again without at least twelve arrows sprouting off him like the martyrdom of St. Stephen. Clint was determined on that much, but he had a hard time believing that counted for much when he was lying on his back with two fingers shoved up his own ass, trying to imagine it was Loki's hand relentlessly fucking him open. When he shut his eyes and saw Loki balanced above him, smiling, remorseless and gentle at the same time, because after all, Clint was his property, his good soldier. Why wouldn't he take good care of him?

Clint had never been so sorry to have a good eye for a package. Loki had been turned on in the surveillance videos from Stuttgart, putting on that goddamn creepy-ass show, and that meant Clint now had statistics in his head: length, thickness, shape. Good enough for his imagination to fill in the missing details and give him Loki sliding it into him, just slick enough not to tear, hard and implacable as Loki's hand had been on his arm before he'd touched the scepter to Clint's chest.

It would have been good, too. He wouldn't have been fighting, he wouldn't have been screaming in some corner of his mind. He would've been working for it, working to take Loki's cock, just like he was panting now, hips twisting, other hand on his own cock working up and down.

He shuddered and came, hot spurts on his own belly, and slid his fingers out. He closed his eyes and lay back panting on the bed. How was he supposed to trust himself anymore? He'd been the same guy all along.

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) astolat May 24 2012, 16:37:09 UTC
Unfff. Also, love that last sentence! <3

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) debris_k May 24 2012, 16:45:59 UTC
I hope guh and wibble are acceptable forms of feedback after having your brain melt on you. (<3!)

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) elliot_wright May 24 2012, 17:54:27 UTC
I love how you made a piece so complex and whole in just a few paragraphs.
And pardon my french but holy shit was that hot.

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) calmdownpickle May 24 2012, 19:28:18 UTC
Oh my. That was quite hot.

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) trobadora May 24 2012, 20:19:10 UTC
This is fabulous. The world needs more Clint fic!

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) neery May 24 2012, 20:35:02 UTC
Oh Clint. ;__;

I will never ever get tired of reading about the various ways he must be completely fucked up in the head about what Loki did to him. That was amazing.

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) athenejen May 24 2012, 20:39:36 UTC
GUH. Fascinating and hot.

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) poziomeczka May 24 2012, 21:28:44 UTC
oh dear GOD. that was. smoulderingly hot, hands down.

PERFECTION, JUST PERFECTION.

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) amanuensis1 May 24 2012, 22:34:27 UTC
S.O.: Have you run your flist recently?
Me: Was about to, why?
S.O.: astolat just updated Revelations.
Me: A;LSDJKFA;LDSFJA;LSDJF;ALDSJFALSFJASLDFJKALS;FSLFKA
S.O.: It's a Clint chapter.
Me: AS;LFJ;ALSDJFLFLASJFLASDJF;ALFJAL;SFJALSDJFASFLAF!!!!
S.O.: (clearly drawing this out 'cos he's enjoying it and is an EVIL so-and-so) She also just posted a Clint/Loki dub-con vignette.
Me: *HEAD EXPLODES*

Oh, you wonderful, WONDERFUL creature. It doesn't matter how long this is; the fact that you wanted to write my current favorite coupling on this entire earth means I'm weak with joy. I may cry.

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) kickair8p May 25 2012, 00:31:48 UTC
That's just . . . wow!

~

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) no_detective May 25 2012, 01:06:33 UTC
remorseless and gentle at the same time, because after all, Clint was his property, his good soldier. Why wouldn't he take good care of him?

Okay, see, the first TWO TIMES I watched the movie, I couldn't even comprehend that scene between Clint and Loki (with the soft-voiced "What do you need?" and "A distraction" and a bow snap and HHNNGGNGHH) as anything BUT pure caretaking dom porn. Like, I didn't even connect it to the PLOT of the following scenes! So thank you for, uh, articulating that ~impression here perfectly. :D :D :D

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OP here astolat May 30 2012, 00:55:58 UTC
Oh my god.
ooooooooooooooooooooohmygod.

This is absolutely perfect and wonderful and wow. Clint is so beautifully conflicted and daaamn is it hot. I can't believe what you managed to pull off in so few words, I can't get over how great this is!

Thank you so much!!

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) astolat May 30 2012, 06:23:56 UTC
Hooooooo ..... brain melt.

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Re: Same (Re: Loki/Clint, Masturbation, [dub-con?]) mozzarellaroses June 2 2012, 15:34:57 UTC
I swear, this!
This!
There are no words.

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