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Apr 23, 2012 17:14



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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) darklumi April 26 2012, 03:55:12 UTC
In what seemed like forever to Tony was actually only a matter of moments before Tony arrived at the smoking remains of the mansion, the faint string of hope that had wrapped itself around his heart was slowly diminishing the closer he got the sight, fire fighters still putting out the flames engulfing the trees that lined the road, ambulances lights and sirens ablazed. There were news vans littering the driveway, obstructing the path, news reporters were barely being held back by police officers and SHIELD opperatives at the iron gate. Tony could recognize several of them, Christine Everhart was amoung them, her golden spun hair is a disray as she swarmed and pushed against the human wall, flashing their cameras and yelling.

He landed with little grace, throwing off his helmet, his eyes searching frantically for any sign that the others were in fact alive and through the dust and smoke he spotted them. Thor and Clint were leaning against each other, the archer was favoring his right leg, his left no doubt broken, and their blonde hair was nearly unrecognizeable from the dirt that covered their bodies. Natasha stood close by, looking calm and composed as always, her hair not a strand out of place, but was quite filthy like the others, she stood tall but soon her body was racked with a coughing fit, a trinkle of blood escaping her lips. Bruce rubbed her back, he was a mess too, his shirt was missing and his pants in shreads like he had hulked out. His back was a bloody mess, scrapes and cuts, and ash making a nice mixture on his muscled back. Steve was standing tall, covered in soot, hair ruffled, and only the slightest scratch on his forehead, which oozed a trail of blood down his left cheek. He was talking to the Coulson, pointing off in a direction, when he spotted Tony.

"Tony-" He started, the other's attention zoned in on him. That's when then and there the tears that had threatened to fall earlier were back but he didn't bother to stop them as one by one they left a clear trail on his cheeks. The dams were broken and with a sharp sob he dropped to his knees, face burried in the dirt before him, he sobbed and sobbed and sobbed. They were alright, they were alright, he thought, he wasn't going to be alone. He was so consumed with the greatest feeling of elation and crying that he didn't notice his face was removed from the ground below only to be pressed against a well defined chest. He barely managed to look up and make out the blurry face of Bruce above him, his eyes widened a bit, but the soothing words that spilled from the other's lips calmed him.

"It's ok Tony, we are all alright." The physicist murmured. "We are all here." Tony couldn't feel the arms that wrapped around his body because of the armor, he knew they were there so he took comfort from the skin of his face to the skin of Bruce's chest touching. He hesitated to wrap his own arms around the body because of the injuries Bruce had but Bruce put his worries to rest when he said, "Go ahead I'm pretty numb anyway." His arms shot around the body in front of him, burrying his face further into the crevice of Bruce's pecs, and tears continued to leak from the depths of his tear ducts.

"JARVIS saved us." Natasha whispered. Tony could feel her presence near but she made no move to get closer. "JARVIS warned us before it was too late."

"Dummy and Butterfingers made it out too." Clint added softly. "With JARVIS's hard drive. So we are all safe Tones. We are all here." With a shuddering whine, he kept his face hidden as he tried to calm down the gasping breaths, his tears had cleared away some of the ash that was covering Bruce's chest, showing a pinkish hue of natural flesh. Bruce had started to lace his finger's into the ink blackness of Tony's hair and his voice rumbling from the depths of his chest, soothing the anxiety from Tony's mind.

"Go ahead and rest Tony." Bruce gently said. "We will all be here. We aren't going to leave you." And finally Tony relaxed, the tension wound in his body faded and the fear and dread drifted away with the soothing carress of Bruce's fingers and the steady beat of his heart enticed Tony to finally relax for a moment, knowing everything was going to be ok.

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) sanhaim April 26 2012, 04:12:56 UTC
I am going to stand here. Right here. And make awed noises.

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) darklumi April 26 2012, 20:03:43 UTC
haha glad you enjoyed it :)

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) deancas91190dc April 26 2012, 05:03:52 UTC
OP here, this is so amazing, I'm speechless. This is everything I could have hoped for and more-it surpasses my wildest expectations(quietly bows to your eternal awesomeness as a writer : ). Most awesome fill ever. And on account of some reviews I've been reading for the film, these two are officially my otp for the avengers, in any form(gen, slash, whatever), which makes this doubly awesome to read! Thanks!!!!!

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) darklumi April 26 2012, 20:07:39 UTC
phew! *swipes forehead*

your welcome my dear! im glad it was everything you hoped for! that makes me happy! im sorry it wasn't very slashy but this was my first attempt at a brucey/tony fic! i tend to lean more towards steve/tony myself but recently there has been bruce/tony fics popping up and i can say its definitely perked my interest as well! :D

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) rei17 April 26 2012, 07:34:49 UTC
OMG - ALL OF THE FEELINGS!!!!
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I love how you described all the different relationships Tony has with the others and how wonderful they all are and how much Tony loves them and how scared he is to be alone again ... Oh Tony.
Oh Bruce. Oh everybody. <3
Great work! *_*

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) darklumi April 26 2012, 20:13:10 UTC
hahaha thank you!! :)

glad you enjoyed it! i would say coming up with the different interactions tony has with everyone was kind of hard. i wasnt sure what tony and natasha would excactly do together but i can see tony enjoying having pretty toe nails! ;D so im happy it appeals to the audience! :)

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) hazel_belle April 30 2012, 05:13:02 UTC
MY TONY FEELS. MY TONY FEELS.

when he realized that he ALMOST lost everyone... oh god, poor baby, let me cuddle you! Dear god, even I was like omg "please don't be dead, the world cannot handle an evil tony stark"

you are good, damn good!

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) darklumi April 30 2012, 16:24:47 UTC
we'll just pet and hold and cuddle poor tony until he feels better!

and thanks for the kind words and commenting! you always make me blush! haha ;D

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) hazel_belle April 30 2012, 19:00:25 UTC
sounds good to me, lord knows he needs it.

and you write good stories, and i always enjoy them! you're welcome!

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) darklumi May 14 2012, 16:06:45 UTC
I HAVE SO MANY FEELINGS!!! Breathe in.............. breathe out.............. omg i can't even breathe!!! XD Love this!!!

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) darklumi May 31 2012, 18:02:21 UTC
*hands oxygen tank over* hope that helps haha and thanks for commenting! :D

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) lovely_lunarian May 29 2012, 21:50:00 UTC
Geez, are you trying to make me cry? Because if you were then mission accomplished. I had to stop reading for a minute half way through because there were too many feelings! You really did an amazing job!

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Re: {Fill] "Through Dust and Smoke" Re: Bruce/Tony, Tony in tears (1c/1c) darklumi May 31 2012, 18:03:35 UTC
thank you very much! i didn't mean to make you cry, ok well maybe just a little...haha ;)

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