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Nov 22, 2011 10:08



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ROUND TWO
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Alphabetize pairings. They will be archived that way!
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Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (1/2) hermione_vader March 17 2012, 05:10:02 UTC
The rain rata-tatatated on the mansion's roof like a snare drum roll. The thunder thrummed in the distance, still twelve seconds behind the snaps and crackles of lightning. Steve stared out his bedroom window and counted the space between them to distract himself from...from everything, he supposed. From the night he couldn't stop thinking about, the kisses he shouldn't have given, the bed he couldn't believe he shared.

He'd just finished counting another round when Tony flung the door open.

"Are you watching this?" Tony motioned towards the window.

"Yeah. It's kind of beautiful if you just sit back---"

"Not the storm. You have to look down." Tony pointed outside, towards the concrete patio they almost never used.

Steve walked over to the window and saw what Tony meant.

Thor was sitting cross-legged on the patio, wearing nothing but a white tank top and red boxer shorts. His head was tilted up toward the sky and his hand rested on his knees. He simply let the raindrops blanket him.

"You got any idea what he's doing?" Tony asked.

"Nope. But he looks peaceful."

"Really? That's all you got? Because we're taking bets." Tony pulls a pen and a rumpled piece of paper out of his pocket. "I've got Bruce and Natasha down for 'meditation,' Coulson down for 'acting like a defiant five-year-old,' and Clint and I picked 'plotting to kill us all in a lightning strike.'"

Steve leaned forward and rested his hand on the glass. "Maybe he's protecting us. He's the god of thunder, isn't he?"

Tony scrawled something on the paper. "Okay, I've got you down for 'quasi-mystical protection ceremony.'"

Steve shook his head and strode out of the room.

*

Steve went downstairs, slid the sliding glass door open, and stuck his hand out. The drops hammered his arm and dripped onto the concrete with clean plop-plops. "Thor? You might want to come in."

"No, I do not." Thor didn't look back.

"Alright, but the storm's only going to get closer." Steve pulled his arm back and shook the droplets off.

"I assure it will not, my friend."

"Really."

Thor turned his head to the side. "Oh, yes."

Steve stepped onto patio and paused, letting the rain splatter on his bare feet. As he stared at Thor's still form, part of him wanted to grab his sketchbook and capture the raindrops rolling down Thor's back and arms, how his limp blond hair hung against his shoulders, the way his white tank top clung to his muscles...Steve refused to think about what the other part of him wanted to do and pushed himself farther out on the saturated concrete.

"Why are you out here, anyway?" Steve asked as he sat down next to Thor. He cringed as the water seeped into his gray sweatpants.

"What were you doing inside?"

"Watching the storm."

"As was I, Captain." Thor glanced at Steve and lighting snapped across the horizon.

"In the rain."

"Yes. Rain is...rain is a vexation and a comfort." Thor smirked. "Not unlike you."

"Excuse me?"

Thor shifted to face Steve. "Your presence can be calming, even inspiring, Captain, but with too much of you, if one gets too close, things become most confusing very quickly."

"What do you mean?"

"The more someone wants you, the more you pull back. It is most perplexing." The sky rumbled behind Thor. Steve counted: only ten seconds this time.

"You've lost your point, I think. That not how the rain---"

Thor interrupted him with a kiss. He slipped his wet fingers under Steve's chin and slid his tongue across Steve's lips. The sky flashed in front of them again.

"As I said, Captain: a comfort and a vexation," Thor said, rubbing his thumb in circles on Steve's thigh. He leaned in for a much harder kiss. More thunder---only eight seconds now.

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) hermione_vader March 17 2012, 05:10:22 UTC
Steve pushed Thor's drenched shirt up and ran his hands up and down the god's back. He swore the rain picked up right then, drumming down on them as Thor pulled him in close and squeezed his cock through his sweatpants until he was hard. Thor yanked Steve's shirt off and he felt like he'd lost a thick layer of skin, but he leaned in closer, twisting Thor's dripping hair through his fingers. It had been like this that first, unmentionable time a week before---all lips and limbs and a dizzying lightness, but now the rain had wiped the unnerving veil from it.

Thor pushed his red shorts off, and then they both kneeled up, and he shoved Steve's pants down. Steve looked down and saw the raindrops coating their hardened cocks. This was absolutely real, not kind-of-sort-of maybe a very erotic dream this time. Steve took a ragged breath and grabbed them both and began stroking. Slowly, gently.

"Must you be so timid about it, Captain?" Thor snapped. Another crack of lightning. The thunder followed four seconds later.

Steve smirked and squeezed them together roughly. Again. And again. And twice more until they came together and thick whiteness mixed with rainwater on their abdomens. Thor pulled Steve in and held him against tightly.

"How long before I lose you again?" he murmured in Steve's ear.

"I'm not going anywhere, Thor," Steve said, brushing a few strands of hair out of Thor's eyes. "Last time, I had no clue what I was doing. I was...I was kind of embarassed."

Thor half-smiled. "Oh, that was all? I could have reassured you, you know. I'd assumed you'd found me a disappointing partner."

"No. You're definitely not that." Steve kissed him, lightly at first, but then deepened it. Another snap across the sky answered.

Then they heard Tony's voice from the doorway. "Keep it up, boys, the internet is going to love you!"

The thunder only waited two seconds this time.

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) sphinxofthenile March 17 2012, 10:24:55 UTC
I'm just going to sit here and dawww into my coffee.

Oh, Tony. You better leak it all.

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) bugeyedmonster March 17 2012, 21:42:46 UTC
Yes, Tony would post it to the internet.... unless Thor manages to beat Tony's face into the grass first.

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) accursedspatula March 19 2012, 06:29:26 UTC
OP here.

Oh. My. God. That was so perfect I had to de-anon. I thought I was the only person on earth that shipped them and then I got this and I'm just going to spend the rest of the night running in little circles because this was everything I wanted and more.

Thank you so much! I adored it--especially the semi-established relationship and the way you characterized Steve and just...unf. *fawns*

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) brushed_velvet March 22 2012, 21:16:53 UTC
Guh! I'm vacillating between *d'awww* and *unf* equally.

I'd love to know how they first got together... *coughs*

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) blcwriter April 3 2012, 22:58:52 UTC
Perfect blend of angst and unf.

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) czeri May 8 2012, 19:06:16 UTC
That was amazing! I loved the characterization of both Steve and Thor, and the touch of humour with Tony's bets ;-)

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) cailamaia May 14 2012, 22:14:47 UTC
XD Tony. You gotta love him, but he's an ass. Lovely interaction between the others.

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) brainzz_insanee May 28 2012, 05:36:28 UTC
DAMN that was both so fucking hilarious and pretty hot! I was loving the rain kissing. Thor all angsty<3 All of Tony's commentary had me in stitches, I was laughing so hard! You got his voice down perfect.

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) cherazz May 28 2012, 05:39:45 UTC
OMFG! Epic win! This is absolutely beautiful - so well written and so well in character for everyone, Tony especially (I gigglesnorted at his last comment)

So vivid and so raw. I could imagine everything so clearly, the storm, their conversation, their faces, their bodies...beautiful <3

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) rin_aokuro July 9 2012, 21:10:26 UTC
Okay, now. I'm totally new in the Avengers fandom and this was the first Avengers!fic I've ever read. ...and I'm liking it a lot. 8D I'd say I'm very happy this fic ended up being my first! XD

I'm totally shipping Thor/Steve and this fic aaaaa ;; ♥ So pretty. Rain, and Thor sitting out there, and Steve going to sit next to him and and and.

"Alright, but the storm's only going to get closer." Steve pulled his arm back and shook the droplets off.

"I assure it will not, my friend."

"Really."

Thor turned his head to the side. "Oh, yes."
Hahaha THIS. Oh, Steve. You're not debating about the storm getting closer with a man who can actually rule the whole storm, are you? XD; ♥

And Tony, he's golden. Totally himself here. :D

Thank you! o/

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) hermione_vader July 10 2012, 04:16:53 UTC
Wow! Awesome! Welcome to the fandom! I'm glad and flattered that you made this your first stop. Come to the Steve/Thor side! We have cookies!

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) rin_aokuro July 10 2012, 06:40:14 UTC
Thank you! Haha, I already am on the Steve/Thor side. Have been ever since I watched the Avengers movie and they were my favorite characters. (Even more after having watched Thor and Captain America movies.)

I wasn't actually shipping them in any other but just a bromance way until I just...suddenly started shipping them when my friends found all the fics. XD A good-looking man + a good-looking man = lots of good-looking hotness in one fic, right? :D

...I really need an Avengers icon.

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) beizanten December 19 2013, 01:06:53 UTC
Cute and hot!~! love tony last line

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Re: Fill: Rain-Soaked Reflections (2/2) sharktoothdecay May 30 2014, 19:57:18 UTC
damn this was a great fic

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