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Ficlet: Lost

Apr 09, 2007 21:33

Character(s): Dairine/Roshaun
Fandom: Young Wizards (spoilers for Wizards at War)
Word Count: 550
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: Written for wanderlight during big_little week. Set after Wizards at War - Dairine deals with the aftermath of the battle. Unbetaed.

( Boyfriend sounded like one of those high school relationships she hated, and they weren't together, not like that. )

fandom: young wizards, pairing: dairine/roshaun, character: dairine callahan, type: fanfiction, exchange: big/little 2007

Comments 5

atrypical April 10 2007, 15:43:42 UTC

I like it. It's very sweet and nice and... and I can't think of the right words. :)

wanderlight April 12 2007, 20:17:57 UTC

I think I already told you how much I loved this, but I may have forgotten to say this the first time round: the fact that she didn't even know what to call him, other than Roshaun -- I think this englobes their relationship, and it might be what I like most about it. He's not her boyfriend, he's not her friend, he's not her partner, he's just. Roshaun.

Also, lollipops. Dairine will find him. I refuse to believe otherwise.

♥ ♥ ♥

labellementeuse April 13 2007, 21:46:29 UTC

Aw, Dari. She's really gonna have some abandonment issues, I think! Thanks for posting this to myriadwords, btw. :)

lifes_sweetener December 30 2008, 16:53:30 UTC

Lovely <3 I will state, without shame, that this is my favorite pairing.

Him going missing about broke my heart.

Lovely, lovely piece. Her puzzlement over what to call him was especially accurate.

readingredhead June 20 2009, 22:38:18 UTC

This is fantastic. I love all the parenthetical asides, like Dairine's trying to hide these thoughts from herself. The best part is not knowing what to call him, and it's frankly what draws me to their relationship--they're so much harder to define than Kit and Nita. Very well written!