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Family Ties

Apr 17, 2007 13:02

Title: Family Ties
Characters: Toph and Iroh
Summary: Family is sometimes what we strong-arm it into being.
Rating: K+/PG
Notes: 603 words. Written for blinkidybah whose request was, "HAY HAY HAY IROH/TOPH" I think I managed to make it work, but it destroyed a part of my brain FOREVER.

( When she pulled away, she said, 'We should get married.' )

Comments 5

erinlin April 17 2007, 17:48:58 UTC

You know, I thought that pairing would be creepy, but you've made it really sweet. I love how supportive Iroh is of her. The ending made me go "awwww!"

ali_wildgoose April 17 2007, 18:44:06 UTC

Well...I figured, if I was going to do this, I may as well try and do it right ^_^;;

insiliarius April 19 2007, 04:03:32 UTC

I was a little skeptical at the beginning, but this is really sweet. I love your Iroh.

ali_wildgoose April 19 2007, 06:07:14 UTC

Thank you for sticking with it! It was a strange story to write, but I'm glad to hear it turned out all right in the end ^_^;

3w_3s07 April 23 2007, 15:46:40 UTC

I clicked on this fully prepared to be 'squicked'...

And now I've finished reading it, I'm creeping myself out, because I actually wouldn't mind reading more.

I don't know how else to tell you how well written I thought this was.