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Lights in the Distance

Mar 26, 2007 00:07

Title: Lights in the Distance
Characters/Pairings: Zuko, Iroh, Mai, with a dollop of Maiko
Summary: Zuko revisits his old apartment in the lower ring, and mourns a home he'd never wanted in the first place.
Rating: K+/PG
Notes: A sequel to Imperfect that nonetheless stands fairly well on its own.

( It wasn't hard to find the right window. )

Comments 16

aj_rayne March 26 2007, 04:41:53 UTC

I really do love the way you write Zuko. Just angsty enough, but with an underlying intelligence and strength. Great job as usual. I enjoyed this.

ali_wildgoose March 26 2007, 13:37:12 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad to hear it! :)

shes_unreal March 26 2007, 06:06:12 UTC

Wow, this is really fabulous! I love it.

ali_wildgoose March 26 2007, 13:37:54 UTC

Thanks!

(I also vote "orgy," incidentally)

ameonna March 26 2007, 06:09:24 UTC

Very, very nice. Four stars! :D

This is my favorite line:

long afternoons in the library and cascades of inky hair, of knives in strange places and rare bursts of laughter

ali_wildgoose March 26 2007, 13:38:43 UTC

(Hee.....I like that line, too)

Thanks!

iscah_rambles March 26 2007, 10:12:59 UTC

That's beautiful; I love the descriptions and the details.

ali_wildgoose March 26 2007, 13:39:08 UTC

Thank you!

peri_peteia March 26 2007, 18:58:11 UTC

<3

I still say AND THEN THEY DID SEX.

*CLINGS TO HER READER INTERPRETATION*

ali_wildgoose March 26 2007, 20:10:51 UTC

FEEL FREE TO WRITE THAT OUT, DEARIE.

peri_peteia March 27 2007, 14:36:11 UTC

...MAAAAYBE.