Imperfect

[ali_wildgoose]

Title: Imperfect, Chapter One of Three
Characters/Pairings: Implied Mai/Zuko
Summary: It's been years since they last met, and many things have changed...some more so than others, and none in the way she expected.
Rating: K+/PG
Notes: This begins immediately after the events in "Crossroads of Destiny." Written for rawles, in an attempt to help her

Comments

[sox_r_uber_cool]

oooh I liked that last line... I'm guessing you're a fan of the "Zuko has a plan up his sleeve and that's why he sided him Azula" theory?

Nicely written, loved thier interaction and Mai's POV... pure love all the way ^_^

[ali_wildgoose]

I don't particularly think he had a plan in mind when he sided with Azula initially -- I think he was probably shocked into it as much as anything else. But I DO think that he'll be trying to figure out what to do with the situation he's gotten himself into, and that whatever he plan he comes up with will likely NOT be shared with his sister....

...though, as you may have guessed, I do wonder if he'll share it with Mai... >;}

[sox_r_uber_cool]

Thats the most plausible theory I have heard so far... lol We'll just have to see what happens ^_^

[ali_wildgoose]

Dammit...you guys are all being so nice, NOW I'm GOING TO HAVE TO WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER

AUUUUGH

XD

[mattador]

DO IT!!!!

[ali_wildgoose]

*does so*

Now if I can just keep it from SUCKING.....

[juxtaposie]

Good lord, I'm so glad they're not fallinf all over eachother making out. Not that I would ever accuse you of committing such a faux pas, but you must understand that, coming from someone who frequents ff.net, it is a valid fear. I loved the characterization. That's what it really takes ot make a fic, and you've got it. I'm hoping there's more of this hiding in your brain.

[ali_wildgoose]

Yeah...really, I feel like it would take a loooooong while for this particular pair of teenagers to start macking on each other. Ty Lee and Sokka? Sure. But Mai and Zuko...? Not so much ;}

[lynx386]

I enjoyed reading this! Mai's Point of View is really well written and the conversation between her and Zuko makes me wonder what'll happen next. Great job!

[peri_peteia]

And so I must ask...WHERE IS THE REST?!

<3

This is very INTRIGUING. I would like to see where you would go with it after this. HINT HINT NUDGE NUDGE PUSHING MY LUCK.

I think my favourite part are Zuko's complete immunity to Mai's attempts at humor. BECAUSE THAT IS TOTALLY HOW IT WOULD BE.

[peri_peteia]

Wow...MY FAVOURITE PART ARE.

To read makes my speaking English good.

[ali_wildgoose]

You know, I keep writing these things thinking "hoho! I'll just write this cute little fic and then get back to all the Professional Writing Blah Blah Blah that I'm supposed to be doing! Whee!"

And then you people have to go and LIKE IT. AHHHHCRAP.

AND I TOTALLY KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, TOO.

DAMMIT.

(Also, <3)