Well, the mod said it was okay!
...Just what the heck do I rate this?
He remembers little else from that night, but what he does remember surprises him. He remembers her eyes, for example, and how blue they were-he had never seen eyes so blue and so beautiful, and knew that if he lived to be a hundred, he would never forget her eyes. He remembers how she tasted like the wine they had been drinking, and wondering vaguely if he tasted like that, too.
What he remembers most, however, was the feeling of being inside of her, of being completely surrounded by her, and having all of his other senses drowned out by the sense of her, and the surreal feeling of completeness that followed.
...And that's about as much detail as I'm putting in the fic. I just don't know what to rate it.
Main plot for the fic is this:
-I'm pretending the comet isn't coming for like, five years, so everyone is a year or two older.
-Aang and Gaang have spent past year in Bai Sing Sei, trying to tell people "HEY THERE'S A WAR!" and rebelling against the Dai Li.
-Zuko still hasn't joined them and is still working in Tea Shop. He's bored as all get out, though.
-They finally run into each other. Aang convinces Zuko to use his ninja skillz to help them against the Dai Li. Zuko agrees.
-He and Katara end up running into each other and working together doing something sneaky (not entirely sure yet).
-Afterwards, they end up having random!sex, brought on mostly by lonelyness and alcohol and a mutural physical attraction, with no real emotions attached.
-They part ways afterwards, with plans to never see each other again, the night being a one-time fling thing.
-Aang finds Zuko and asks him to join Gaang and teach him firebending. Zuko, thinking about Katara, declines.
-Gaang wanders around for about a month or two before Aang goes back to Zuko and is all, "Dude, just teach me firebending already!" Zuko, temportarily forgetting Katara, agrees, and joins Gaang.
-Awwwwwwwwwwwwkkkkkkkkkkkkkkwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrdddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.
-Nobody except for Z&K know about Z&K's little fling, because that would be an even more awkward conversation that neither one of them wants to go through.
-They have problems because they are really, really nervous around each other (obviously) and are still attracted to one another (but no emotions still) and have to deal with one another on a daily basis.
I just...don't know if I should rate it M or not. A part of me says yes just because of the content involved, even though there aren't many details, but at the same time, if I give it a M rating...people will want/expect more details.
HELP ME, I AM CONFLICTED!
(one of these days, I'll actually write a fic instead of planning/outlining fics. Won't that be a miracle?)
Jak
He remembers little else from that night, but what he does remember surprises him. He remembers her eyes, for example, and how blue they were-he had never seen eyes so blue and so beautiful, and knew that if he lived to be a hundred, he would never forget her eyes. He remembers how she tasted like the wine they had been drinking, and wondering vaguely if he tasted like that, too.
What he remembers most, however, was the feeling of being inside of her, of being completely surrounded by her, and having all of his other senses drowned out by the sense of her, and the surreal feeling of completeness that followed.
...And that's about as much detail as I'm putting in the fic. I just don't know what to rate it.
Main plot for the fic is this:
-I'm pretending the comet isn't coming for like, five years, so everyone is a year or two older.
-Aang and Gaang have spent past year in Bai Sing Sei, trying to tell people "HEY THERE'S A WAR!" and rebelling against the Dai Li.
-Zuko still hasn't joined them and is still working in Tea Shop. He's bored as all get out, though.
-They finally run into each other. Aang convinces Zuko to use his ninja skillz to help them against the Dai Li. Zuko agrees.
-He and Katara end up running into each other and working together doing something sneaky (not entirely sure yet).
-Afterwards, they end up having random!sex, brought on mostly by lonelyness and alcohol and a mutural physical attraction, with no real emotions attached.
-They part ways afterwards, with plans to never see each other again, the night being a one-time fling thing.
-Aang finds Zuko and asks him to join Gaang and teach him firebending. Zuko, thinking about Katara, declines.
-Gaang wanders around for about a month or two before Aang goes back to Zuko and is all, "Dude, just teach me firebending already!" Zuko, temportarily forgetting Katara, agrees, and joins Gaang.
-Awwwwwwwwwwwwkkkkkkkkkkkkkkwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrdddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.
-Nobody except for Z&K know about Z&K's little fling, because that would be an even more awkward conversation that neither one of them wants to go through.
-They have problems because they are really, really nervous around each other (obviously) and are still attracted to one another (but no emotions still) and have to deal with one another on a daily basis.
I just...don't know if I should rate it M or not. A part of me says yes just because of the content involved, even though there aren't many details, but at the same time, if I give it a M rating...people will want/expect more details.
HELP ME, I AM CONFLICTED!
(one of these days, I'll actually write a fic instead of planning/outlining fics. Won't that be a miracle?)
Jak