oneshot: Secret In Her Chest

[ohsoxalive]

Title: Secret In Her Chest
Word Count: 239
Character/Pairings: Mai/Zuko, Katara
Summary: There is a scar on his chest. It wasn't for her.

Comments

[silly_izzy_me]

Mai doesn't need protection.

Good Zutara fic all the same (okay I wouldn't really know lol but still).

[ohsoxalive]

Not physically. But maybe figuratively, emotionally, internally, she does. It's still nice to know your lover is there for you.

And thanks. :)

[silly_izzy_me]

Lol yeah I know (I've analyzed Mai a thousand times over); just being ~witty with a direct quote ;)

[ohsoxalive]

Ha, yeah. Sorry. xD I just kinda realized that.

And same here, Mai is one of those characters you need to analyze to really understand. <3 your icon, btw.

[kaoriz]

I like. =)

[finchburg]

I loved the tone of this. Excellent little story. <3

[lotuseyes]

I like this, its definately something I think any girl would wonder about in her position. And she doesn't come across as whiney ('what about MEEEE?'). Very nice! Mai why do I like you so much better in the fan universe then in the canon universe? maybe because you have depth here

[rabidline]

I love this. Perfectly IC (doubts without presented as overbearing jealousy- just simple, rational truths). Especially this paragraph;

It’s the same exact feeling that was there when she read the letter, when he shut the door in her face(she got out herself), when he didn’t show up to save her from Azula and her lightning (Ty Lee did that, Ty lee, who she ignored and forgot), and when he didn’t show up and fling her cell door open, arms embracing her and telling her of an ended war (that was her old uncle and a family she doesn’t think about).

Zutarian or not, I was a bit dissapointed when I learned that Zuko did absolutely nothing that relates to Mai after TBR. Come on. You don't forget your first official girlfriend like that, Zuko. Even if you two are 'over'.

And your fic gives me ideas about writing a 'Mai-and-family'-centric fic. Gah.