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Prompt #3 Undying: "Flames Go Out" Owldee K+

May 29, 2010 17:14

Hey guys, first post here.:) And right before the deadline, just the way I like it.:P

Title: Flames Go Out
Author: owldee
Rating: K+
Words: 500
Genre: Gen
Char/Pair: Sun Warrior Chief, Ran & Shao
Warning: Spoilers for The Firebending Masters
Summary: The Sun Chief doesn't want to believe the dragons can be killed.

( The Eternal Flame never goes out, but they do. )

prompt 03: undying, rating: k+, author: owldee

Comments 4

salomesensei June 2 2010, 22:22:18 UTC

This captures the tone of the series so well, formal and yet emotionally powerful. Well done!

owldee June 30 2010, 00:54:43 UTC

*late reply is late*

Thank you so much - that means a lot. The tone of the series is something I really respect...so great to know I managed to pull it off!

dr_abraxas June 3 2010, 05:05:02 UTC

sorry I'm so late in replying :) it's a very well done piece; there are so many gaps waiting to be filled in the backstory of Avatar; the temple and its inhabitants are among them. it was both surprising and fitting that a mezzo-American type of people would be the ancestors of the fire nation since sun worship was so prevalent. also the pity taken on the dragons and the excesses of a people so out of whack with reality that they'd hunt down those responsible for their own power. it was all thought provoking :) excellent stuff!

owldee June 30 2010, 01:07:34 UTC

Heh...well I'm notorious for late replies, incase you couldn't tell.xD; So no prob.;)

Glad you found it thought provoking. I love the dragons and the Sun Warriors so much. It is one of those many interesting ironies in Avatar, how people often destroy that which they have to thank for their own life and abilities. *slaps Sozin*