Fic: Ease Up (NC-17)
Title: Ease Up
Author: Ava
Prompt: #4 Lust
Rating: NC-17 (Say it with me people, NC-17)Disclaimer: I own nada. Zilch. Zip.
Synopsis: Answer to Jenn’s challenge found here
Spoilers: None, that I know of.
Ease Up…
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Comments 9
Loved it! The humor at the beginning and the snarkiness was so them, and to have it turn into such heat. Wow. And then to end it there! You are so cruel. :D
Wonderful read!
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I think it ended at the prefect moment 'cause something horrible and dirty might've hapened with the oldest Winchester. And I think it'd creep me out more than a little writing that Buffy sandwich. Speaking of the sandwich I should have that fic out by next weekend.
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*snort* Like I would have minded more of the smutty in this fic. ;) Although I'm sure Dean may have squirmed a little in the beginning. lol
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While the kissing and the subsequent smut was hot, I really enjoyed the opening. You captured Buffy well and you gave me a definite idea of who Dean is. (Sadly, I've never seen a yeti nor have I met anyone who has. I feel deprived. *g*)
The end was evil though I agree with your comment to Pol that something might definitely have happened with the eldest Winchester that might be something no one wants to deal with given she just spent the night with his son. Of course, that makes me want to challenge you to write a *non*-smutty option... for the tenseness and how they know each other. *eg*
However, I want to know more about the Buffy sandwich fic you mentioned to Pol... if it's who I think it is, YUM. ;)
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The smut was just fun to write but I'm tickled that you enjoyed the scene leading up to it, that was the heart of the piece and I'm glad you enjoyed it. *winks* BTW: I did not do Dean justice, he's got too many layers to capture in a oneshot. But his sarcasm and personality let me play him off Buffy and I love writing dialogue.
The end was a little evil and I my muse has calmed down on the smutty front so there is a chance for a non-smutty (not as much fun mind you) sequel. Of course I need to get the next chapter of Hollow Places out, so it might be awhile.
As for the Buffy sandwich, I actually have two going at the moment...Damn she gets around in my stories. I blame the 50 smutlets! But the first one the intials are C/B/D. *ducks behind Pol and points toward Jen and Meri* They created the plot bunny. Its all their fault.
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I'm all for more of Hollow Places. While I do enjoy your SPN crossovers, Buffy/SG-1 is my first crossover love especially if there's any sort of positive Buffy/Daniel interaction, and more so if it's as it is in Hollow Places.
And ohhhh, that's the threesome I was hoping for, Ava. I feel like I should give those ladies cookies or something. You, too, since you're the one writing it. *bg*
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First I love this so much. You write Buffy and Dean so well together, and although the short smut you write is always good, I liked the fact that you wrote a story leading up to the smut in this case.
Also, am I one of the only people who was thinking totally clean thoughts when they read the last few lines? I was thinking 'how sweet they worked together to kill a demon or spirit, that's nice.' Then I read all the comments and it made me think much more interesting and needless to say dirty thoughts.
How about this for a future story? One year later and Dawn brings her boyfriend/friend Sam home from Stanford... how will Buffy hide the fact that she slept with both his brother and his father? Well she gets very drunk one night and her and Sam...
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I'm glad you enjoyed the story in the begining. I personally had more fun writing the plot for this fic so it's nice to know others enjoyed that part as well.
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