Total Darkness

Dec 26, 2010 16:00

Title: Total Darkness

Pairing(s): HanChul, slight!KiHae

Genre(s): Romance, high school AU, suspense

Length: 5496 words

Rating: PG-13

Summary: A haunting love story about a boy who lived in the light and a boy who lurked in the shadows.

Inspiration(s): Let’s just say that I think that the story of the Phantom of the Opera is genius.

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Everybody knew Kim Heechul. It was like a law in the school. )

pairing: hanchul, pairing: kihae

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chocotsu129 February 19 2011, 15:50:30 UTC
May i put comment in this fic?
Oh! its so Great fanfic. How HanChul tragedy story. T.T I swear, im crying how both of them died. And i hope bummie confess to hae..
I super love this!

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followurdestiny March 7 2011, 17:02:18 UTC
Amazing, fantastical, but tragic story...
I loved the way you brought this story to life... <33

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xenobius June 30 2011, 22:04:41 UTC
I simply absolutely love this.

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stars_in_love January 4 2013, 20:38:17 UTC
I felt the tears by the end of this. Seriously, Phantom of the Opera is the most angsty and amazing thing ever made, :') I kind of don't want to put a happy face icon, but I don't want to put a sad one either... This was just really bittersweet :) with the KiHae kind of polishing it off.
Ice cream for the angst this time <3

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ava_lava January 4 2013, 23:14:44 UTC
Omg this didn't have a perfectly happy ending! That is super rare for me; I can't stand writing sad endings because I feel so guilty.

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stars_in_love January 4 2013, 23:47:23 UTC
Darn'd wanted to put a gif but I'm a newb :-|
And I thought the ending was pretty angsty... compared to what I would write :| I can't write angst for my life .___.'''
I think this had the perfect touch of sadness with the sense of a new beginning with KiHae

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ava_lava January 4 2013, 23:58:48 UTC
I'm so glad you think that way. Angst is haaaaard.
And yah, for any pictures, you need to embed them in html style, or use the "insert image" button if the journal style has that option.

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shinnyluvssuju February 9 2013, 21:35:57 UTC
Phantom of the Opera is my favorite play ever. The story is one of my favorites, unforgettable. I se it on Broadway and it was incredible. This makes me want to watch the movie again haha

Wow, this was.... Amazing. You made the modern version work so well. I like that Donghae was telling the story.

I love all your works, you're truly amazing. Wow.

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ava_lava February 10 2013, 00:12:55 UTC
Wow, this is an old fic! I'm so glad you like it! I remember it being difficult to write since I kept comparing myself to the original - I don't come even close!
Thank you so much for reading! I'm thrilled that you like my work!

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