Volunteers?
I need someone to read a novel and give me feedback . . . it's about 67,000 words, so it checks in at around the same length as Huxley's Brave New World, although it's probably not nearly as interesting.
Some chapters have been posted in my LJ, so if you're interested, scroll down and have a look or check out the sample chapter posted up at www.nanowrimo.org under my penname "Autumndark" . . . and if you're interested after that, email me either at spectral452@yahoo.com or autumndark@fictionpress.com and let me know.
Essentially, I'm looking for feedback including the following:
-title suggestions
-plot tweaking/reworking suggestions
-what works, what doesn't in terms of a)characterization, b)plot line and development, c)"filler" and/or random tangents and d)anything else that occurs to you . . .
So it's fairly open ended . . . other than I would ask that you either be a fairly fast reader or have some time on your hands, since I'd like feedback in a pretty timely fashion (looking at a top limit of a month)
Thanks . . .
Some chapters have been posted in my LJ, so if you're interested, scroll down and have a look or check out the sample chapter posted up at www.nanowrimo.org under my penname "Autumndark" . . . and if you're interested after that, email me either at spectral452@yahoo.com or autumndark@fictionpress.com and let me know.
Essentially, I'm looking for feedback including the following:
-title suggestions
-plot tweaking/reworking suggestions
-what works, what doesn't in terms of a)characterization, b)plot line and development, c)"filler" and/or random tangents and d)anything else that occurs to you . . .
So it's fairly open ended . . . other than I would ask that you either be a fairly fast reader or have some time on your hands, since I'd like feedback in a pretty timely fashion (looking at a top limit of a month)
Thanks . . .