Deflowering Alias Fic Challenge Posting

Mar 23, 2004 08:54

So once again the brilliantly mad and all round brilliant lunasky is hosting a fic challenge at her community clandestine_ops. So I think I'm the first to post my story, "Do You Do Windows Too?". It's fluffy, a real departure from my normal style--I'm worried it's so sweet it might make your teeth ache, anyway...( here it is, warning I finished this late last night and only got four hours sleep so I may have missed something, but I just had to be first... )

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daera23 March 23 2004, 13:50:28 UTC
Oh dear lord I LOVE THIS!

It's just, just . . . gah

Where are my words?

This is so perfect - naughty little French maid fantasy, but - twist - not really the French one but her Iowa sister. Wow.

And I love how it really was Syd and Vaughn playing this game - how you captialized on how Syd's job is to role play. She's very good at it. She's snared intel from many, many a macho man, just by turning on a bit of female innocence.

And I love how Vaughn really did give into this baser guy fantasy. And such great build up!

Oh this fic is totally turning me into a silly fangirl.

I would call this so sweet it makes your teeth ache - I'd call this good and dirty fun! I like how you elaborated on the Syd and Vaughn you set up in We Like to Watch

And I am really glad you got inventive with the deflowering - I hope more people do. The last thing we need is a bunch of Mary Sues . . .

And about Mike the Plumber. Oh you so set yourself up for that. I am not going to take responsibility for the fact that you have turned on my inherent fic stalker tendencies. SEQUEL! Pretty please with sugar on top? bats eyelashes Syd would make a great bored housewife a la Mrs. Robinson . . . .

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autobadgirl March 24 2004, 11:49:51 UTC
::checks head for swelling:: Hee-hee! I am so glad you liked it and
hey Wow! Thanks for the crack_van posting too! I didn't realize until my dear, dear friend nwhepcat sent me a little email that said,
"You made Crack Van! In just one day!!!!

::high fives you and fans self::

Gotta read that when it's not all over the work screen"

::boggles at the response:: Can I just say I love my fandom and all who are in it! Y'all are making me blush big time!

I like how you elaborated on the Syd and Vaughn you set up in We Like to Watch
Seriously I'm not kidding all thanks for this fic idea are owed to spy_barbie! But it sure was fun to write so I'm fairly positive there will be a sequel, I keep hearing Weiss ragging on Vaughn about it in my head...
::hugs::

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