Comments | aurorawest: Fic: Anniversary

aurorawest

Fic: Anniversary

Mar 08, 2007 11:59

Title: Anniversary
Fandom: LOST
Rating: G
Summary: Juliet reminds Ben what day it is. Ben/Juliet fluff. Oneshot.
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: I don't own LOST.
A/N: I've been wondering for months if it's possible to write pure Ben/Juliet fluff. Here's the result.

( Ben liked the dark. )

lost:juliet, lost:ben/juliet, lost:ben, fanfiction:lost, lost

Comments 6

skinny_bacon March 8 2007, 13:11:29 UTC

FLUFF!!!!!!!!! Ben/Juliet fluff is now my favourite thing in the world. Wow. No words to describe. This was beautiful, absolutely beautiful. So cute, so fluffy, a perfect history for them. Thank you a million times.

Actually, now that he thought about it, he rarely told her what he was thinking about her. Which, considering how much time he spent thinking about her, was pretty ridiculous.
And this was very perfect. *sigh*

aurorawest March 16 2007, 19:50:59 UTC

Glad you liked it! Thanks for the very kind words!

spicedogs March 8 2007, 13:50:56 UTC

Wow. This is exactly what we need. A little insight into their lives, not just snippets. I love this piece of fanfiction. It satisfies my thirst about their relationship. And I don't care that the creators did not write it. You did, and I am a bit happier knowing about their "history."

aurorawest March 16 2007, 19:53:09 UTC

Thank you! I'm always happy if I've satisfied Ben/Juliet thirst. :)

anonymous March 16 2007, 05:46:26 UTC

Yet again... You need to write for the show! :)

"...and watched it pour off, overflowing out of the gutters and smacking into the lawn. ...A light breeze rustled through the village and Ben breathed in deeply." Evocative. Nice description.

"The breeze caught her hair and made it flutter lightly against her cheek. It looked nice when she wore it down like that, but she didn’t very often. And he’d never told her that he liked it." Telling details.

I don't even know what to say. I'm pretty sure whatever the show offers us in Ben/Julietdom will leave me nowhere near as satisfied as your stories. Please, continue. They're lovely. :) (Plus, they actually capture Ben's voice, which I think is fairly difficult, and something I've only seen one other fan-fiction writer do. Kudos!)

aurorawest March 16 2007, 19:57:27 UTC

Yay, I'm glad you liked the bit about the rain! I agonized over that for awhile. :)

Thank you so much for the very nice compliment!! I'm blushing at your first sentence. :)

If I have captured Ben's voice, then I put it down to a two week period in November when all I did all day was watch episodes of Lost that had Ben in them. I feel like I got to know him pretty well. :) I'm happy to hear that I do capture his voice though, because sometimes I wonder if I am.