Corrupted Absolutely

[aurilly]

Characters: Eden, with Bennet, Sylar, and the Haitian
Rating: R (for a violent death?)
Words: 868
Summary: What might have happened if Eden's plan for Sylar had succeeded
A/N: Written for

Comments

[albion1919]

Oh this was great, Eden fic! I wonder what would have happened if she succeed to...

I love the theme of having an ability that's bigger then her and that she feels like it can drawn her out and take her over.

[aurilly]

Thanks so much! I saw the prompt and list of possible characters, and all of a sudden the idea of a power that's way too powerful jumped out at me. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

[eternal_moonie]

this was totally amazing!

[aurilly]

Thank you! :)

Re: My Rise to Power

[jaune_chat]

To Archivist Aurilly - You lateness will be exused, for your offerings have found favor with me.

Re: your story. Awesome. Seriously awesome. I have often wondered, and enjoy reading stories about, how someone's power would affect them. For people with mental powers, like Eden, Matt, or the Haitian, how would their powers affect their personality, their mental balance, and everyone around them?

This was a great look into Eden's character, of what her ability feels like to her, and how it can run rampant. Her calling for help from the Haitian was moving.

The man of no words had mastered her lethal tongue.

I loved that. The Haitian's silent understanding of what she wanted to mean, not to say, and how he was willing to control her when she'd asked, reminded me of a relationship between (and this may sound weird) a prodigal athelete and an Olympic coach. She has the power, but he's the one who can mold it.

Thank you so much for this!

Re: My Rise to Power

[aurilly]

Oh, I love that analogy with the coach! Brilliant. And very apt. The Haitian is awesome and doesn't get used enough, so I'm so glad of your prompt, because I don't think I've ever had an excuse to write him doing anything before, and I really enjoyed it.

I'm so incredibly happy you liked this. <3

[perdiccas]

This is amazing. I love how the parallel between the Haitian and her The man of no words had mastered her lethal tongue and her horror at being so controlled by her own power, the tragedy of people not listening to her unless she makes them.

I am thoroughly blown away. EXCELLENTLY done!

[aurilly]

Thank you sweetie! I've always thought that her power would be so depressing---you never know if people really agree with you, or if you're hypnotizing them. And she seemed pretty shy and unassuming. Would be so awful to have no one pay attention to her normally.

Thanks for reading!

[lemomina]

Eden fic- Yay :D

I loved the story and how she is an addict for her power , once she starts , she can't stop

[aurilly]

Thank you so much!