Ha, that convo, it originally started out as just them being uncomfortable in their outfits but then the dialogue kind of showed up out of nowhere. Oh, these two.
Definitely my favourite pairing. I'm absolutely craving more S/J fic because there's such a lack of good "fits in with canon-type" fic for them. So please write more!!
Gorgeous! And this is them, so vividly; it feels like canon. There are so many things that I love about this--the Dharma jumpsuits, Dan, the banter, the tension. Fantastic job.
THANK YOU! The canon comment is such a compliment, because I was killing myself over this fic for a few weeks, especially in regards to Juliet, who isn't one to wear her heart on her sleeve. I'm glad you liked!
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"Well, sunshine, if you put out every once in a while - "
She rolls her eyes and brushes past him, "You're ridiculous."
"Hey, you married me." He smirks. "What's that say about you?"
She stops at the door and looks back, answering in the same motion as stepping outside. "That I'm charitable."
^^this had me laughing so much.
You write both of their voices really well, so thanks for sharing :-)
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