mblaq/t-ara; i don't know (mir/jiyeon)

[augmenti]

I don’t know.
Neither of them know what the other wants.
Mblaq/T-ara; mir/jiyeon. 852 words.
❦for firequakes who wrote me awesome seungho/soyeon fic.

Comments

[firequakes]

dear kit, have i told you yet today how much I LOVE YOU? bc i do, i really do.

Her breath catches in her throat when he pulls away right after a hand slips under her shirt, fingers exploring up her stomach.
i love that part so much, because i like how there is a hint of some sexy here, because god while these two are so fucking adorable, i have kind of been wanting to read a little more... pg-13, HAHAHAHAHA.

It’d be good publicity, the managers all told her, but no one wanted that stress.
in general, this statement. :( (although honestly, i have realised that while i like dating rumors, i probably wouldn't enjoy everyone going public with their relationships lmao. i like speculating who's dating who, lol. and if everyone came out it'd take the fun out of it hahaha.)

and i really like their hesitation about each other, how they're both apparently unsure, and how they're both a little shy approaching the subject. i can imagine it in my head, and jfc, they are just so precious. ♥

[augmenti]

eee there is no way you can love me as much as i love you!♥♥

hahahaha, i really wanted to push it farther into pg-13 but then i stopped because i didn't really think that'd fit lol. i love speculating who dates who also, so i agree that it would take all the fun out of things :( not to mention, there'd be a lot of fan-hate and no one wants that. i'm so glad you like it, and holy crap, this entire comment is beautiful ;~;♥

[weerainbow]

Oh wow, this actually brought tears to my eyes! It's really touching. I love that you have in there the characters of the two that everyone knows, the side of them that is obvious to the public...and then you gradually revealed their insecurities and fears and yet their trust in each other and it feels like such a beautiful love story!! And not just a short term one but it feels like the start of one of those stories that are handed down from grandparents on their golden wedding anniversary about their early days together :o) It's that kind of gentle yet safe and steady beginning.
Really really lovely!! ♥

[augmenti]

oh, thank you so much for such an amazing and beautiful comment! i'm glad it feels kind of realistic and hopefully not too out of character♥ that is such a cute idea, thank you so so much♥

[countrymir]

i had never really thought of this pairing but i see it now and i think its adorable. the fic was really just a great read. describing how straight forward he would be with this girl friend was just love, he really is a nice honest boy and that plays into his character loads more than most writers give him credit for ;-;

[augmenti]

i don't know mir that well, so this was a sort of character study on him and relationships lol, i hope i did okay! ♥ thank you so very much for reading and for the nice comment♥♥

[sugaredglowing]

I was telling firequakes how I rarely saw jiyeon/mir fic that went past the surface, but this one did it. best part about this is how it's still so them even though it's more serious, and they're more serious.

loved it (:

[augmenti]

aw thank you so much! i'm so glad that you think so ;____; characterization was what i was most worried about, so that it worked out that makes me happy, even if they are too serious (haha)♥ again, thank you so much ;____;