f.t island; stuffed hearts; hongki/jonghun(/seunghyun)

Nov 14, 2011 21:56

stuffed hearts
f.t island; onesided seunghyun/jonghun, hongki/jonghun; pg-13; 2,607 words.
jonghun stuffed seunghyun's heart full of love from the start.

He put the little stuffed heart inside of him and gave him a hug and brought him to life, and he’s been with him since that day. )

f: f.t island, l: 1000——5000 w, p: jonghun/hongki, p: jonghun/seunghyun

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countrymir November 15 2011, 18:59:08 UTC
goodness, my heart right now.

i've only dabbled in fti, reading and just peeking into the fandom and i just flip tables when i find fic like this. its just, ugh what is this beauty?!

it was so soft and pretty all around. i love how you always kept the bit of innocent air to seunghyun because of course he is a child's play toy and should never be corrupted. and when he was badmouthed by hongki i was just, ugh it felt so much like a real person was the topic of conversation that it just killed.

and jonghun still caring for seunghyun even after he is a grown man and a father just warmed my heart. you never really hear of toys passing through the fathers so this is so sweet and really heart warming.

even hongki and jonghun's relationship i loved. it was really realistic in the sense that you never went into great detail about much of anything but you could tell that they were a typical couple with their ups and down.

AND RAGE SEUNGHYUN WANTING TO NOT LOOK AT THEM PDA BUT NOT BEING ABLE TO LOOK AWAY!!!

just, overall beautiful and lovely and it makes bitter frozen hearts tingle back to life and all things happy and romantic and precious. ;-;

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augmenti November 15 2011, 23:36:42 UTC
aw thank you so much! seunghyun's voice was what gave me the most trouble because i never knew if i was making him too innocent or not and yet i wanted to keep him seunghyun, even as a teddybear. i don't know how successful i was in bringing out his personality but still. i find it sweet when people keep their stuffed animals from childhood but eventually we all have to grow up, i guess. i think that's what frustrated hongki about him. but thank you, i'm glad you like it ;_____; ♥

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