The Definition of Want - Chapter 8

[audreyii_fic]

Title: The Definition of Want
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: M
Characters: Bella, Jacob, Edward, and others (J/B)
Genre: Romance/Humor/Angst -- you know, all the good ones.
Warnings: Bad language and eventual sex.

Summary: You know how Edward offered to let Bella and Jacob make puppies? And we all

Comments

[onetraveller]

GUH. So I read all the chapters and firstly, I feel terribly guilty for not reviewing each of them. I'll try my best to be decent length.

Firstly, you, my dear, are a bloody brilliant writer and how much do I love you for attacking this plotline? A LOT LOT LOT LOT LOT LOT WITH THE FORCE OF A THOUSAND BURNING SUNS LOT ♥

It's amazing how you have them in character but god, you make them REAL unlike SMeyer who *sputters* I'm not going to get into that 'cause I'll start ranting, but THANK YOU for making them speak like normal people ;)

His snark is awesome ♥

The emotions in every chapter are as clear-cutting as a knife in your heart, of course I don't know how that feels like, but it seemed like a good analogy :D And god, when Edward came and knocked I felt like my heart was being ripped apart.

I LOVED the fight, you described it perfectly, I could picture EVERY single moment! Perfection! And the little things like "She'd know I was lying anyway." PERFECT.

And the interactions with each and every one of the characters are done absolutely spot-on. You could feel the weight of the world on his shoulders when he was talking to Rachel and her regret, and his pain, and the betrayal, and the love, and it was just awesome!

CHARLIE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥

[audreyii_fic]

Ooh, thanks for delurking! :) And "attacking" the plotline is probably a good term for it (I feel like I'm Uma Thurman in Kill Bill and I've got a katana in each hand... except it's really just a laptop and I really can't wear a yellow jumpsuit... oh my God I'm tired). I'm happy you like the snark, and the fight, and the heart-destruction (though I do apologize for that). And I also squee like an itty-bitty fangirl for Charlie... that's just how I roll.

Thanks, and I'm glad you're enjoying :)