The Definition of Want - Chapter 8
Title: The Definition of Want
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: M
Characters: Bella, Jacob, Edward, and others (J/B)
Genre: Romance/Humor/Angst -- you know, all the good ones.
Warnings: Bad language and eventual sex.
Summary: You know how Edward offered to let Bella and Jacob make puppies? And we all ( Read more... )
I love how everything you write - almost in every paragraph - there is always a double meaning. Charlie's whole scene made me want to laugh except I was way too nervous for the end of the chapter to do anything but whimper anxiously. This ... I wondered exactly how bad it would be once he no longer thought I was a good kid. ... I've kinda been waiting for because Jake and Charlie have such great relationship, Charlie truly believes that Jake is a better option for Bella and it's all about to go straight to hell.
Quil and Embry absolutely make my life right now, that scene was just perfect, you have their voices down (Meyer never made teenage boys sound like teenage boys), and the misunderstanding was both gut-wrenching and hilarious. Quil is such a douche, I love him. Embry knows what's going on so hmmm, that could be interesting.
Coming Soon: Wherein Jacob discovers he's bought time at a very high cost. What? Did all the sexing not take? What's going on? Wuh? I can't wait for Sunday!!!!!!!!!!!
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(Erm. Not really. It's all kind of accidental. But I felt like having a supervillain moment. I'm tired.)
I'm glad you liked Charlie and the boys :) They're fun to write. Well, Charlie is, anyhow. This was really my first shot at Quembry. I'm happy it seemed to go reasonably well. (And yeah, Quil's a douche, but he's also a teenage boy... they're all kind of douches.)
Anyway, thanks, and yay! :)
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