The Definition of Want - Chapter 8

[audreyii_fic]

Title: The Definition of Want
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: M
Characters: Bella, Jacob, Edward, and others (J/B)
Genre: Romance/Humor/Angst -- you know, all the good ones.
Warnings: Bad language and eventual sex.

Summary: You know how Edward offered to let Bella and Jacob make puppies? And we all

Comments

[nodawnnoday]

Reading this now!

[audreyii_fic]

Okay, I'm highly amused that you had to post that before you finished ;)

[greeneyed_me]

You! Kent is the man! My little brother looks EXACTLY like him so we always dub him 'Baby Alex' when we see him. Haha.

And your name? A Florence fan I presume?? I already heart you bb!

[nodawnnoday]

Gah I know, I love Kent. and Laurn.

And yup I'm a florence fan.

Heart you too.

[audreyii_fic]

I'm starting to think "Hurt So Good" ought to be the theme song for this fic. Thanks :) (Also, don't hold your breath for that long. You'll turn blue.)

[pnai_87]

You literally had me at the edge of me seat...every time I click on a new chapter...and your Coming Soons are torture...between my overactive imagination and my pessimism, I'm not sure if I look forward to new chapters or dread them. I mean that in the nicest possible way.

To Bella, I leave nothing, since she already has everything that matters. KYAAAAA! That is such a Jacob thing to say.

[audreyii_fic]

Hee. Thanks :) And yeah, Jacob has a flair for the bitterly dramatic. (Just think about his chapter titles in Breaking Dawn. Those are far and away the best thing about that awful book.)

[pnai_87]

Breaking Dawn...there were a lot of things painful and wrong about that book, but I did love the fact that we got to see things from Jacob's POV...I'm ashamed to say that I haven't re-read any of the series after the first time, call if laziness or childish petulance, but I just can't. It's like playing the movies in my head (inputing what they should have had and deleting what I didn't like) or the books as movies, and going crazy with whiteout and Edward cuts.

Question: When the Breaking Dawn movies comes out, would you go watch it? I'd probably go see it because I couldn't not see it, but I would still hate it.

[serpentsortiam]

"I'd probably go see it because I couldn't not see it, but I would still hate it."

You took the words right out of my mouth. The whole movie saga has been this way for me.

I'm now waiting in dread for the next two -shudder- installments. I don't know maybe splitting Breaking Dawn will mean that we get more of the original book or maybe it will mean more nails-on-chalk movie time, either way I am waiting.

~Yesi

[audreyii_fic]

I really needed something to cheer me up and this really didn’t.

Er... sorry.

Like a ticking clock - at least, that’s what I felt while reading.

(Or bomb...)

I'm glad you like all the different character parts :) This chapter obviously has a different flow than the other ones, but, well, it's from Jacob's perspective... and if he was telling the story, his time with Bella would be worthy of three chapters, and the rest of this shit would only be a quick story, I think.

Or something. I'm tired. And I'm really ready for this to be finished. (So is my husband, let me tell you.)

[devlinacardigan]

Yeeeee!!! New Chapter!!!

All right then. I loved it (like always). There's angst, inferred Blackwater, and boys fighting. It's a good thing there was no sexin' because my head might've blown off.

I loved the chat with Charlie too. I've really started to like him through fanfic.

[audreyii_fic]

LOL. Charlie is made of win (I fell in love with him via the movies. Billy Burke is head and shoulders about EVERYONE else in those films.) And if there'd been sexin'... um... Quil and Embry might've had something to say about it. Heh.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked :)

[devlinacardigan]

Yeah...that might've brought up a whole other set of issues for our boy.