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Pieces of the Memories (Drabble Set 2)

Apr 19, 2011 16:03

Title: Pieces of the Memories
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: T
Characters: Swan Family, Black Family, Clearwater Family
Genre: Humor/Angst/Friendship
Warnings: Occasional language.

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denise216 April 19 2011, 22:25:54 UTC

Ok that was so cute I cried I loved it I love this drabble set it's amazing youre amazing the things that go on in your mind are just wow greatness

audreyii_fic April 19 2011, 22:42:45 UTC

Hee. Thank you very much :D

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audreyii_fic April 19 2011, 23:15:16 UTC

LOL. Yes, I can't imagine that a child raised by Charlie -- especially one already given to introversion -- would wind up anything but shy.

The second is what comes from writing on PMS.

Glad you liked the third :) I meant for it to be the start of a regular length one, but then I reached that part and went... no, that's it, it's done.

likexaxdove April 19 2011, 23:08:43 UTC

Leah heads outside too, and spends much of her time finding bugs and lecturing them fiercely for having too many legs.

WHA OMG SO ADORABLE.

Jacob's first word is Bells.

*dead*

audreyii_fic April 19 2011, 23:16:26 UTC

That's actually a direct lift from the older kiddo around here. I don't know what it is about the extra legs that offends him so, but he has to discuss it with every bug he sees.

likexaxdove April 19 2011, 23:23:17 UTC

*heart swells*

That is so cute that I can't stand it.

audreyii_fic April 19 2011, 23:25:38 UTC

Yeah. He pulls that adorable shit just before I'm about to lock him in the basement to live on mice and plumbing pipe condensation until he's twenty.

hatchi_90 April 19 2011, 23:09:55 UTC

Oh my goodness...this was all kind of awesome and adorable. I feel so sorry for baby!bella and the second drabble really made me sad and hate Reneé even more! The last one was oh so sweet...so I loved just everything!

audreyii_fic April 19 2011, 23:18:17 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked :) Baby!Bella gets bowled over a lot. This is the unfortunate side effect of being shy around very strong personalities. It'll learn 'er, though ;)

lulu_honey April 19 2011, 23:12:43 UTC

*pouts* You're making me miss my neighbour's kids something fierce. I can't even stand how awesome that last part was.

audreyii_fic April 19 2011, 23:19:01 UTC

Aw, sorry you miss 'em. And the last part was a surprise, glad it worked :)