The Fire of the Sun -- Chapter Six

[audreyii_fic]

Title: The Fire of the Sun
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: T
Characters: Full cast (Jacob/Bella, Sam/Emily)
Genre: Romance/Angst/Wolfpack!Humor
Warnings: Language, violence, and references to adult behavior. See here for more details.

Comments

[gypseian]

*SQUEAKS LIKE A DOLPHIN*

[audreyii_fic]

I practically heard that.

[audreyii_fic]

*whistles*

[audreyii_fic]

Tribal markings... hmm. Who knows.

Jessica is love... and in this chapter, at least, Bella is too.

Fucking Cullens.

I'm hearing that a lot today.

[bleviee_62vw]

Oh. My. God. WHY?! WHY did you leave it like that? And a hiatus?! Well, I suppose after being attacked like that by Sam, you deserve a break. Just... use a fake name during your hiatus, so he can't find you, because if you get hurt by a vengeful Alpha, it'll be even MORE of a delay. Feel free to send Sam my way, because if I break my wrist that just means I can't write my physics exam next Friday. I'll take that hit for you, because 1.) no exam = happy time, and if I had to use a proxy writer I'm pretty sure my friends in the class would pull a Mike and help with my wrong answers and 2.) after all, you gave me hella good eyecandy last chapter

[bleviee_62vw]

Oh, yeah, one more thing (like I didn't already give you a novella, sorry.) I ADORE that little!Jacob wanted Bella to be a part of things too. You've turned Meyer's opinion about the Jacob-Bella bond totally around--she theorized that the felt pulled together because he'd eventually imprint on The Baby Of Doom. You make it seem like they were ALWAYS going to be together, and Jacob just imprinted because the wolf knew it, even if they didn't realize it yet. Which is awesome.

[audreyii_fic]

I try never to miss an opportunity to talk about Baby!JakeandBells. There's so many opportunities to work with. (And frankly, this moment took me completely by surprise. Gonna roll with the punches, though.)

[bleviee_62vw]

Baby!JakeandBells are seriously under-done. I'd love to see more fics about it. (Not a pressure thing, just a statement of facts, possibly with a hit of a request for recs.) And I totally adored it, unexpected or not.

[setherfan91]

What?! No, you can't just leave it there! What are they going to do to Bella, take her to Jacksonville, hide her somewhere? And what is Jake going to do when he realizes she is gone? And Charlie? Ahh, I don't think I can wait two weeks! This chapter was fantastic, as per usual. How will Edward react when he finds out that Bella and Jacob slept together? Or will he find out? Jessica is hilarious, I wish she had been more like that in the books (actually I wish the books had been more like your story, period.) Who's voice will the next book be in? Great as usual, am counting down the days until the next update!

[audreyii_fic]

Yes, actually, I can :D

And what is Jake going to do when he realizes she is gone? And Charlie?

I'm sure they'll handle it rationally and with total equanimity.

Book!Jessica got the shaft. Movie!Jessica is a beast. I love writing her. She's kinda taking on a life of her own.

[thatjediscum]

That fucking bitch. You just don't know the R-A-G-E that is building up. What is she to decide? Alice needs to die. Edward and Alice need to die. I just keep seeing in my mind's eye Jacob's reaction to Bella being gone, and I shutter. And now I'm think about Charlie's reaction, and, this is just all bad. All bad things will come from this.

[audreyii_fic]

Heh.

I just keep seeing in my mind's eye Jacob's reaction to Bella being gone, and I shutter. And now I'm think about Charlie's reaction, and, this is just all bad.

Oh, they'll probably take it just fine. Wouldn't you agree?