The Fire of the Sun -- Chapter One

[audreyii_fic]

Title: The Fire of the Sun
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: T
Characters: Full cast (Jacob/Bella, Sam/Emily)
Genre: Romance/Angst/Wolfpack!Humor
Warnings: Language, violence, and references to adult behavior. (Click here for more details.)

Comments

[lulu_honey]

"You were saying 'don't', Bella," he said quietly.

The return of Charlie Swan, Chief of Awesome.

... and apparent contortionist.

My mind just did dirty things.

Jessica grinned again. "It's my commanding presence," she said with false haughtiness. "And the breasts."

"Parenthetically, I possess breasts." THE PRODUCERS OF TWILIGHT WOULD LIKE TO REMIND YOU THAT BREASTS EXIST.

Jessica was SPOT ON. It all flowed so well and Kendrick would have nailed it, 'cause she's awesome like that. I really like seeing Bella in a natural setting like school or Newton's. Its nice to see a person who gets thrown into the supernatural have to kill time with the mundanes, just to remind us that the "special" world is still special to them too.

which stopped Alice from claiming the seat.

Ha! Take that you annoying plot device disguised as a character.

Great job! I can't wait for next week :)

[audreyii_fic]

My love for Charlie continues to know no bounds... and man, my mind didn't go dirty places with the contortionist thing, but now... I may need a minute.

"Parenthetically, I possess breasts." THE PRODUCERS OF TWILIGHT WOULD LIKE TO REMIND YOU THAT BREASTS EXIST.

Don't think for a moment that that wasn't EXACTLY what I was thinking ;) God, I've seen the Rifftrax a dozen times and it will NEVER stop being funny.

I'm glad you liked Jessica :) And yeah, I like Bella in normal situations, too. When she's only with the supernatural, the supernatural loses it's... um... supernaturalness. (I'm tired.) Bella should never have felt as comfortable in either world as Meyer made her. In my opinion, anyhow.

Anyway, glad you're liking! I hope everyone adjusts to the weekly update thing okay. I just can't turn out these chapters (which are clocking at 7k+ words apiece) every three days. I'll die.

[lulu_honey]

God, I've seen the Rifftrax a dozen times and it will NEVER stop being funny.

I know exactly what you mean. The Google search part is my favorite ("Who wants the first slice of birthday man?!" lol). The unfortunate thing is that I can't look at Kellen Lutz now without "Hellooooooooo, doin' your sister."

Bella should never have felt as comfortable in either world as Meyer made her.

But don't ya know? Bella was meant to be a vampire. Ugh. *vomits a little*

Weekly updates are fine babe, it will help you retain your sanity. I found that with MoE I wasn't even done mentally processing a chapter and you'd posted the next one. This will give us all a bit more thinking space.

[audreyii_fic]

See, and I just hear "Emmett: the 'Dude' vampire."

I never thought about thinking space. I guess it never occurred to me that people would actually be absorbing... huh. Well, that'll be a bright side to less speedy updates, I suppose...

[lulu_honey]

Uh yeah ... I kind of ... get really into your fic. I totally have to be in a nice calm space and not have anything else going on so I can absorb.