Along the Way to Freedom Chapter Three

[aubrey_grace]

There were very few things that Sylar actually liked. Watches, peach pie, and blondes were amongst them. Nathan Petrelli was not. His hatred for the thing who called himself a man only grew stronger as he trailed behind the congressman and The Hunter. Their words were hushed but Sylar’s super hearing had no problem understanding what they were

Comments

[revdorothyl]

I'm SO hoping this is simply a plan that Sylar and Claire came up with together.

I'm enjoying your story, but you might want to think about getting a beta-reader, or at least a proof-reader, to help you catch all those typos and misplaced or missing words before you post.

[batfan_sarah]

i'm really enjoying this! i assume sylar helping danko get claire is actually just part of the plan. oh, minor note too, you had the pres. talking to nathan and he said he "eluded" to something. but if i remember correctly, the "elude" is like, to get away from something, as in something "elusive". i think you wanted "allude" as in to reference something :) i'm a total english nerd...

looking forward to your next update on this!