31 Days of Fanfic: Six

[auberus]

So, so sorry for the late update.  Still, this one's extra-long, and has some hint of an actual plot.  Plus? I get to leave Alabama the day after tomorrow and go home, home, home.

Here's day six: a swimming expedition, an encounter with a centaur, and hints of dark doings afoot.  (This one's a little more slashy (slashier?)  than they have been so

Comments

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i'm really enyoing this series! i just had to comment on this one, beacuse i have a ridiculously big weakness for hand-holding/grabbing/touching. :D

splashimus maximus, hahaha.

[auberus]

thanks muchly for the feedback.

(and just so you know, Sirius held Remus' hand all the way to the edge of the Forest...and neither James nor Peter said a word.)

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i have no words to describe the sheer adorableness of that. D':

they didn't say anything because they didn't notice or because they preferred not to comment? hahah.

[auberus]

Oh, the latter, definitely. (The only one who doesn't realise what's going on is Sirius, and that's because he is a big clueless goofball.)

[auberus]

..er, and I was actually wondering -- if you're going to be online for a bit -- could I possibly get you to look over #7 for me? Life is better with someone to check your spelling.

[spacefragments]

sure, just... keep in mind that english isn't my first language, so i might miss some stuff. i'm pretty confident spelling-wise, but i wouldn't trust myself with grammar.

just letting you know in case you'd rather have a native speaker check it instead.

[auberus]

The grammar I'm not so worried about. Part of the joy of writing from the perspective of a fifteen year old boy is that they rarely (even Remus) have perfect grammar. Likewise, the spelling's not a big deal either -- if I can't spell it, my computer lets me know I've screwed up. Mainly, I just want someone who knows the characterizations and can tell me if my plot ideas suck.

My email is auberus@gmail.com -- drop me a line, and I'll send what I have over to you.