The Atwood DITFT: Generation 4, Chapter 7

Feb 08, 2014 15:37


Author's Note: Welcome back to the Atwood legacy! I... don't really have anything to say right now. What?? That never happens! Oh, other than, I apologize if this is the last update of this legacy for awhile :S As I may have mentioned, I'm having a hard time with writing the rest of this generation. I'll do my best to keep up with it, but I'm ( Read more... )

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tale_legacy February 8 2014, 23:08:52 UTC
YOU FIEND....BUT JOEY WAS GOING TO BE A PERFECT BIG SISTER D: This will only make Genie worse...and poor Graham.....but....but....gah.

At least we got to see everyone again...that was so nice :3 They all grew up so pretty :3 And Joey really was adorable, let her be a girl woman XD

Great chapter :) DON'T MAKE ME WAIT. PLEASE?

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roxmorgirl February 15 2014, 21:12:56 UTC
:( I hate it but I had to do it! I'm sorry :(

I had fun with the family reunion! That was one of those things I hadn't exactly written beforehand but that just happened ^_^ I LOVE how all Graham's siblings turned out, ah <3 And JOEY <3 I am obsessed with her, omg. As you know, I suppose XD

Thank youu <3 I'll try lol XD

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purple_lila February 8 2014, 23:55:17 UTC
I don't know how, but today I felt like you would post a chapter. And I was right xD AND that's a good thing because that means I get to see the Atwoods. c:

Joey is the cutest thing with that tutu! >u< Soooo cute. ^-^ And yay for Christmas, that means family reunion!! :D (Christmas is my favorite holiday. :'3)

BUT WHAT?! Miscarriage? Whyyyyy???? ;~; Everything was going so well..

Anyway, great chapter as always! It's so great to hear from you! c:

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roxmorgirl February 15 2014, 21:00:34 UTC
Haha! That's awesome! I'm glad you were excited to read :3

Awh I just love Joey <3 I'm glad you do too! I had a lot of fun with the family reunion! And YES Christmas is my favorite too!! It's just so happy <3

I know :(

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! :D

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renderedpixels February 9 2014, 01:33:20 UTC
Okay so I am going to write this whilst reading the chapter so get ready for a LONG ASS COMMENT
i refuse to be sorry.
I was literally just sitting there like 'awhh' at the cutest bonding moment between Joey and Graham. Holy hell Joey is absolutely adorable.

uhoh, smile not reaching her eyes…i smell an argument…

Too girly?? Uh, what? I guess she's trying to make a point about individuality or something…? Uhhhh. okay.

Bellatrix. Just. Bellatrix.
awesome name

AHAHAHAHAAAHA A SEX TOY?!!?! omfg that is absolute brilliance.

your house is so effing beautiful idek what to say right now

Wow joey sure is smart! 0.0 holy moly
i always get a little stupidly jealous, you know, like with those five year olds who can play piano really professionally? I just sit there like WHY CAN'T I PLAY PIANO LIKE THAT
*ahem*

noooooo. NOOOOO THIS BETTER NOT BE WHAT I THINK NOOOOoooOoOO
you dick.

But hey I still love you; you are so bloody good at writing! But damn if you ain't a li'l bit evil ;)

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roxmorgirl February 15 2014, 21:05:14 UTC
Those are my favorite kind of comments ;D No need to apologize!

Omg, I am obsessed with Joey and Graham, I'm glad you love them too XD

Yeah... Genie's a little... well, idk, hopefully it'll all make sense eventually... for now it's just kinda bitchy and confusing lol.

THANK YOU. <3 She's actually a sim from a previous legacy I did for fun, and I think she's so preeeeetty! Also her name is Bellatrix, so that's a plus ;D

Hahaha I added that at the last moment, thought it was pretty hilarious slash something James would totally do XD

And THANK YOUUU about the house! I'm actually so proud of it lol! So thank you <3

Little musical prodigies are the best XD Although I feel you, I'm jealous too! It's like they don't even have to work to be good at it but I would have to try so hard omg. EFFORT. NO THANK YOU.

I'm sorry I'm a dick :(
But I'm glad you enjoy the story anyway XD I suppose I'm probably evil... But that's what makes this fun right??

Thank you for this great comment, it was so fun to read!

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chene_sims333 February 9 2014, 05:04:25 UTC
Okay first off YAY CHAPTER!
Joey is an adorable little girl, and so smart! I have a feeling that will benefit her A LOT in the future (because I thinks moms about to lose it).
I'm not sure what Genie was getting at not wanting her to wear 'girly' clothes but I do like that she had that moment of thinking 'oh that didn't come out right' I know I'm always gushing over how realistic I think your characters are but it's really the thing that makes you stand out among most of the stories I read :D
That is such a horrible thing to have happen, especially since Genie is clearly not all that stable. This is only going to add more pressure to their marriage and that is such a sad thought :(
All in all it was a pretty good chapter, even if the ending was sad. Hopefully that writers block doesn't hold you up to long. Try not to force your story into a plot line, let it flow a bit more organically and it should be easier to write (that's how I do it). Good luck!

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roxmorgirl February 15 2014, 21:08:09 UTC
YAY <3

Lil Joey my musical prodigy! Yeah, she probably will need it, though... :S

You know you could gush over my characters nonstop and I would never get over appreciating it <3 Thank you so much for the lovely compliment! It always makes me happy to hear that! I have been working really hard on making my characters realistic, that's always the goal for me!

Yeah the miscarriage is not exactly helping matters, at all. We'll see how they deal with it next chapter. :(

But thank you! I'm trying to do that, and it's hopefully working! I've had the outline of this generation planned for a long time, but it's the details that are really getting me right now (how do I get from where I am right now to the end point, and all that). I'll try to take your advice! <3

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mirandacourt347 February 9 2014, 11:05:52 UTC
Oh my God, the ending is so sad but I can't even fully be sad because Graham and Joey are just <3 <3 <3!
I'm all caught up now and I'm loving it already, but I am here to inform you that it is 100% okay to spam more of the father-daughter love xD
Also, it was wonderful to see the family in one place again!
Great chapter ^_^

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roxmorgirl February 15 2014, 21:09:19 UTC
Haha that's kinda how I feel too! xD I am OBSESSED with Joey and Graham <3 But yeah, the ending... :(

Thank you for catching up!!! I really appreciate that! <3 I'm glad you are enjoying!

Yay for family reunions! :3

And thank you! I'm so glad you're reading :D

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