State of the Writing -- still a lot of editing

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Still doing a lot of editing.  I finally finished going through all of the different critiques for Don't Drink the Water.  Hopefully, in the next week I will have a new draft that will need a lot more work, but will be a much better story than the one I have right now.

After looking over everything, I don't see how that will be hard.  I've learned a lot since I wrote this, and I think I can polish it up nice will all the thinkgs I've learned.