Fic: Point of No Return (Kurogane x RSyaoran)

[atthla]

Title: Point of No Return
Author: Atthla
Fandom: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle
Pairing: Kurogane x RSyaoran
Warning: Angst. Spoilers.
Rating: T or PG-13
Disclaimer: CLAMP owns all.
Challenge: 30_romances #19. Home Body ; Bubbles ; Stay
Word Count: 3246

Summary: Dealing with guilt is never easy, especially when both of them are running away. Sequel to Oubliette

Comments

[dreamzworld]

Yes, you made Syaoran cry a lot, but I admit that that was so sweeettttt of him ^0^ I like the line " “Don’t leave me,” the kid’s voice was a wretched echo of a whisper - small, frail, shaky, like the whimpers of a scared, helpless animal. “Please”" and "Syaoran had caught up with him, trapping him in the circle of his arms. It shocked Kurogane so completely " I was screaming when I read that lines. And until now I still want to scream. >0<

When my image of Oubliette is Flower and Wind (strange huh? I am still feeling strange why I think of those which make that fic beautiful), my image of Point of No Return is , well, don't be surprised '^^ , ocean wave, black, dark night '^^ When I read this fic, motion of ocean wave in dark night was playing in my mind.

I have this little thought about what Syaoran's feeling about Kurogane's thought of other Syaoran is. I, as reader, know from Kurogane's side that he has different thought of Syaoran and other Syaoran. and In Oubliette, Kurogane has said that they two are different, but Have Syaoran still had a doubtful thought whether Kurogane see him as a different person with other Syaoran or not. mmm kind like Syaoran's jealousy with other Syaoran because of Kurogane.

[atthla]

Screaming is good, especially when it concerns Syaoran XD

Because the fic is supposed to be dark! I'm glad you got the right impression this time (I still can't understand about that flower-and-wind thing...)

Well, I think Kurogane understands that this Syaoran and that Syaoran are different. It's just that their being so alike makes things complicated.

As for what Syaoran thinks, hmm... let's save that for another fic XD Thank you for the comment! ^^

[dreamzworld]

It's about your userpic icon. I really like your Syaoran icon. I think that the words "IMPRISON ME" on that icon have appropriately explained this kind expression of Syaoran.

I have this feeling which Syaoran said to everyone that look him "Hey, I am Sexy" or "I can make your heart melt" or "Come here you. Come to me. Closer" or "You surely want me to be yours"

And Yes, you win, Syaoran! I feel that Syaoran... , you are Sexy >0< >0< and I want to keep you in my prison so just I that can always look your Sexy face. And your eyes, don't look at me with those eyes!! Cause your eyes make my heart melt and scream. Oh Nooooo .. >0< And don't give those eyes looking to anyone else. I am jealous... I want you to be just mine XD

OK, back to Normal mode '^^ I think that icon means possession and lust.

How about you? Are you agree with that opinion? How is your thinking about the "imprison me" words that you used?

[atthla]

Ohohohoho, someone noticed! Yes, that's why I made the icon. That expression on Syaoran's face can be interpreted in soooo many ways that I can't help myself XD Glad you approve!

Syaoran belongs to Kurogane and the clone but maybe you can ask him to share XD