Comments | atrata: Fic: In Between Days; Harry/Snape; PG; (1/34)

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Fic: In Between Days; Harry/Snape; PG; (1/34)

Sep 13, 2004 04:07

Title: In Between Days (1/?)
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Rating/Warnings: This installment is probably a PG, but it's going to vary. Channish.
Setting: Post-OotP
Summary: What I Did On My Summer Vacation, by ClinicallyDepressed!Harry and AmbiguouslyTrustworthy!Severus.
Feedback: Pretty please.
Disclaimers: Not mine. JKR's.
A/N: This is not quite a WIP, ( Read more... )

fic : hp : in between days

Comments 9

kaleidascopeyes October 13 2004, 10:37:51 UTC

Hey, I just stumbeled upon your journal and was sitting back with a cup of tea, ready to start reading your fic when I noticed the name of your journal and said to myself "now that sounds highly familiar"...and then i scrolled up...and found MORE Rosencrantz and Guildenstern references!! So Im just leaving this comment to let you know that youce got awesome taste man. Now, I'll go back to reading the snarry action...

atrata October 13 2004, 10:44:02 UTC

*grin* Thanks! Hope you enjoy.

annephoenix April 17 2005, 13:19:51 UTC

oh. Merlin.

You realise I am now doomed to sit up in my pyjamas all of Sunday night reading the rest of this fic?

... What a start! Imperio! Zap!... Sorry, I have a fondness for that curse. *off to continue*

orionnoire May 26 2005, 11:38:10 UTC

Great start! I love Harry's bewilderment at seeing Snape at the Dursley's and your ending with "Imperio!"! *runs off to read the rest*

quilt_stitcher May 29 2005, 20:57:28 UTC

Okay, just started this. When I saw that you were so near the end, I thought I'd wait until all 34 parts were up. So far, very intrigued. Snape seems spot on, and that "shall I force you?" oooh, too creepy. I must say, I wasn't expecting Imperio, despite the "force" references. I just thought he'd haul him upright and drag him. Ha, I must think like a Muggle.

Atm I am wondering about the fact that Harry can throw off imperio. Of course he's in pretty bad shape. I'm guessing that's from depression/self-starvation? I like the way you describe it all - you don't tell us quite what's wrong, you just let us feel the way he feels.

Ok, moving right along....

atrata May 29 2005, 21:01:16 UTC

Yeah, he can resist it, if he wants to. But he's clinically depressed, and not in much state to resist anything.

Anyway. Welcome aboard. Glad you're enjoying it so far. *g*

quilt_stitcher May 30 2005, 10:37:47 UTC

Oh, I enjoyed it. I stopped reviewing each chapter when I had to go offline... already had them all open in separate tabs so I could keep on reading. I finished the whole thing, loved it. Will be writing you a proper review in a bit.

Gah! rebecca_keys_16 February 17 2009, 19:32:48 UTC

Okay, You've reeled me in. My favorite lines are, of course:

“Mr. Potter!” Snape thundered, and Harry’s head exploded.

HAHA!

When it was finished exploding... daylight was pouring into his room. Harry squinted into the light, and then looked back at Snape.

Expertly applied Snape-revenge. Lol!

“Shall I force you?” Snape asked again, softly.

Oooooooo... (shiver shiver shiver shiver glee)

*Clickety*