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Title: Torrential
Author: citikitti
Disclaimer: Lies, all of it!
Rating: NC-17, so I've been told, though it might be just a stern R.
Pairing: LotRPS, specifically Monaboyd.
A/N: Honestly, I think I got the hardest effing lyric. And I’ve not listened to the song either, though I did at least read the lyrics to the whole thing. Kisses & cookies to why_me_why_not for the

Comments

[diea]

That is absolutely fucking adorable. Awwwww And fuck, felattio in the rain? Awesome. hee Now I'm wondering how the other Monaboyd will turn out. This is only the second third RPS I've ever read.

[kat_scratches]

I made you read RPS! I made you read RPS! *does happy dance* Now, that didn't kill you, did it? :D And sweetie, my whole feckin' family is sick with the flu (except Maddy & her iron constitution), so your comment has cheered me enormously. *loves*

[kellygreen]

Aww, Kath! That was SO adorable! Beautiful writing, as well. This paragraph is absolutely fabulous:

The rain is still sheeting down; they can’t even see the car through the deluge. It’s wetter, somehow, than British rain, Dom thinks; it’s somehow more purifying, more cleansing, though he’s really bloody cold now, shivering despite Billy’s arm around his shoulders.

See, told you I'd read it! :P

[kat_scratches]

Yay! And thank you. I find it very amusing that the first two comments on here are from two people on my f'list who said they'd never read RPS. And you both liked it! This makes me so so happy! *loves you*

(Incidentally, if you were planning to pop down for a visit, this is not the week. Most of us are flu-y this week.)

[daydreambeleevr]

“What?” Dom mumbles, wondering suddenly if he’ll ever find the button for Billy’s fly, and whether Billy will even want it back.

aw, that's sweet. like he'd want to keep it as a keepsake kinda thing. (or maybe hold it hostage if Billy really wanted it back badly enough) :grin:

Billy tilts his head back to look at Dom. “I am home,” he says. “You just didn’t know it before.”

that is a wonderful ending to a very sweet story. Dom and Billy are my favorite pairing, so thanks for sharing this with us!

kerry =)

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Thank you; I 'm flattered that you enjoyed it! They're one of my favourite pairings too, though I read far more of it than I write. I'm glad you think this (my first Monaboyd!) turned out well.

[feelforfaith]

None of those fantasies, however, have included a veritable torrent of New Zealand rain sluicing over them

But isn't reality better than any fantasy? :) I love that you chose rain--and getting wet and muddy and cold--to be part of that moment. I liked this story very much: great writing and all the little details, like Dom thinking about Billy's lost button.

[kat_scratches]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've been telling people that I must be seriously jonesing for spring as this is the 2nd fic in a row (other was in another fandom) that was all rainy & muddy.

[pj1lycanfreak]

Of course you already know that I totally love this thing. I even loved it back in it's raw form before edited version.

I can't wait to see the other one you are working on.

[kat_scratches]

And eventually (*rolls eyes*) I will finish it, I swear! Thanks for the love, sweetie! *snuggles* (Now, aren't you glad I intro'd you to RPS?)

[pj1lycanfreak]

I am very glad you got me into RPS. and I love the banana. *winks* you remember how I eat them right? *evil grins* (check back in my LJ if you have forgotten: something about it being a plaything rather than food hehe)

Suddenly I am hungry...hum...wonder why?