A Single White Dove - Chapter 1/1 - ByouxKazuki [Kazuki's POV]

Jul 01, 2012 19:53

Title: A Single White Dove
Chapter: 1/1
Author: atmosphere_zero
Beta-Reader: misfitmisfit (Thanks a lot! <3 ( Read more... )

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eimininja July 2 2012, 00:26:20 UTC
I have tears in my eyes here. Damn that was so sad. So good though, I really enjoyed reading it!

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atmosphere_zero July 2 2012, 00:55:02 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! <3

Oh, goodness! *hands over a tissue* I apologize for the tears ;A;

Yeah, it was :( Kazuki wouldn't tell Byou that he was actually sick and dying. Poor Byou will never know that he was actual lying T_T

Thank you ^//^ I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it!

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alizamarie_chan July 2 2012, 05:53:32 UTC
Waaaaaw so wonderful!!!!!
I love paring ByouxKazuki
*o*b

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atmosphere_zero July 2 2012, 13:12:44 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! <3

Ah, thank you ^//^ Me too! ByouxKazuki are an awesome pairing *.* They should be more stories of them (>.<)

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wnb_angel July 2 2012, 17:57:40 UTC
This was really good, it brought tears to my eyes. Kazuki's inner struggle about protecting the one he love or confessing everything... so sad and very well written. And the last lines Kazuki said to the darkness, heartbreaking.

I'm really looking forward to Byou's point of view.

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atmosphere_zero July 3 2012, 04:24:45 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! <3

Oh, goodness! *hands over a tissue*

Kazuki's inner conflict tore me apart as I wrote it. It was difficult to write at certain points in the story since his inner thoughts were so heart wrenching yet filled with only good intentions. Everything that Kazuki thought and did was sad... Ah, thank you for the compliment ^//^

Byou's part is in the middle of being written. I hope his part will live up to Kazuki's part ^^;

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