Petals of a Cherry Blossom - Chapter 1a

[atmosphere_zero]

Title: Petals of a Cherry Blossom
Chapter: 1a/??
Author: atmosphere_zero
Beta-Reader: misfitmisfit (Thanks a lot! <3

Comments

[alizamarie_chan]

WOOOW SMTH IMPRESSIVE ^^b

[atmosphere_zero]

Thank you so much!! <3333

I was afraid it wasn't going to come off well since a lot of rewriting and editing had to be done. But I'm glad it came off well ^^

[alizamarie_chan]

Yeeeeeep d^_____^b
Very well!!! Great job!!!

[k435y]

standing in front of some dolt with a confused face lol!

mizuki is adorable.

poor manabu. what a sucky childhood. well...at least he finally managed to escape his father? D8

“Yeah. The one who took down that ‘drug lord’, sir.” Kenzo sarcastically stated. ...so...was he being serious or not? o_O?

i lol every time manabu's pov calls kazuki a "dolt". XD

“Oooh! Happiness means… food and money!” Kazuki childishly commented. i agree. XD

manabu doesn't seem that shy. i love his bluntness. XD

[atmosphere_zero]

Hehe, Manabu doesn't seem to be shy around Kazuki or Mizuki XD Got to love the way he is xD

Manabu escaped-ish and more about it is revealed in the later chapters :D

I believe Kenzo was being serious... or maybe he wasn't? D: But I think he was mocking Tora for taking down some big drug lord ^^;;

Thank you so much for commenting =D *will respond to the other ones* XD

[riyu_sama]

OMGEH I AM FUCKING SCMREANING OMGEH OMGEH MY POOR BBY MANABU HOW DARE THESE HORRIBLE FUCKING PEOPLE DO THIS TO YOU!? NOT TO MENTION THEY'RE YOUR FAMILY!?!?!?! WHY I OUGHTTA I WANNA FUCKING PUNCH AND BEAT THE HELL OUT OF ANYONE WHO DARES LAY A HAND ON MY PRECIOUS BABY AHHHHHH Djiewhjifnjewhfijewn *FLIPS ALL OF THE FUCKING TABLES*

Also, omgeh I just realized that we almost write Manabu in the same way I amf ucking crying ahahahha dsjbcvidsjin Like, I know people mostly write him off as this gloomy, shy, and nervous person because let's admit it not only is he a cancer but even his bandmates described him as such lolololol

But gawd! Your Manabu characterization reminded me of how I wrote him in my Sujin Cafe story lolololol HIS LOVE FOR NATURE IS JUST A+++++ SUCH GOLD YO fbweuidfwehjd

And my poor bby Manabu, I'm just so glad that he at least felt a little loved when his grandmother took him in <3 Thank you Oba-chan, for loving our Manabu QAQ May you rest in peace dshfjewnfhwj how sad it must've been for Manabu, to finally find family